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 Lightningflash - String beat, finished?????? |
Lightningflash 
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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Please check out my new track 'String beat, finished??????' and post your comments here!!!
Im sorry but I just couldnt resist posting this now that I think Iv fnished it
if you find something that needs to e done, tell me.
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"EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE."
Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745
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18-11-2007 19:53 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yep, sounds pretty sweet to me. Kinda drags on a little towards the end, imo - the only thing I'd do is perhaps reduce the track length to about 4.30 or even 4.00. Other than day, well done. Nicely produced track, I especially like your beat edits.
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19-11-2007 20:07 |
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tryptech
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like the intro sounds
is very movie like, like american beauty intro
beats are nice and chill
mastering of the snare coul dod with a boost.
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19-11-2007 20:18 |
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Phalanx
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Registration Date: 13-09-2007
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Very interesting piece, I like the chill feel.
I don't really like the hihats and rides panned over to my left and right ears. While the panning is nice, I think it's a bit too extreme and distracting.
The rolling snare at 2:40 is a really nice touch 
I agree that the piece starts to get a bit repetitive near the end.
I like the string bass that you have, but I think the piece would benefit from an increased bass presence. A more dynamic, moving bassline interspersed throughout the track might be a subtle way to keep the listener interested.
I like the outro with the chimes, it's a nice way of ending the track.
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19-11-2007 21:26 |
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Lightningflash
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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Yer as always Ill take your suggestions on board,
I think I need to leave it alone for a bit and then listen a fresh.
I do think though, we are much more lightly to see the slight failings in a track than most, so we have to remember that.
thanx
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"EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE."
Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745
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19-11-2007 22:37 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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not bad man. a bit too plain tho.
also the beat sounds a little bit too loose ya know?
but again.. i respect your ideas.
you always seem to get something refreshing.
peace.
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26-11-2007 18:03 |
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Shunyatta
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Registration Date: 28-11-2007
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Hey mate, this is definitly not my kind of dnb! But I had to comment it anyway, really nice work with the hihats/closed on this track! That's what stood out for me the most, good variations on the drums as well. The synths are, well.. really "upbeat", happy like! But they are well done, really enjoyed it! Although it lacks some variation, maybe some more synth work within the same kind of upbeat genre would be good, or maybe, and this would probably be what I would do if it were my track: Since the "happiness feeling" comes across so well, the track could do with some disfunctional bursts of dark pads and heavy drums later on, this way it would be like a story, or a reflection of the human psyche, humanity ain't just pretty flowers and rainbows ya know 
Well I'm just babbling now, that would be my thing, not yours I believe. Anyway, even though it's not my kind o thing, I really had a good time listening to it 
Keep at it mate!
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30-11-2007 11:43 |
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