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OBLIVION12 
Producer
Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'screwface' and post your comments here!!!
still work in progress, thanks for peoples advice on my last track, i have just started producing drum and bass, im trying but would like some help and advice, my sound cards not the best but i try, please let me know what you think of this one and any advice is gratefully recieved thanks OBLIVION12
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18-11-2007 18:31 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Very entertaining stuff, but again it sounds like you listen a lot to mixes because you made a couple of different themes and you slowly switch between them. Easy on the stereo and reverb on you basses. Some basses could do with more sub action (which should deffo be mono). Try to work on a track which is more based around 1 theme, with an intro, a buildup, a main part, a drop and a second mainpart and eventually an outro. Your current track sounds like a labyrinth filled with all kind of goodies which sound very nice on their own, but you're completely lost amongst them (especially the end is a bit of a chaos).
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18-11-2007 23:15 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Like that synth sound. Very nice. The drums pattern isn't bad, but I think the snare is a bit poor, Sounds like a bad sample. I must agree with the previous comment. You have really have about 2 or 3 tunes in this! They could all be good as well. Really like the tune in the 4-5 min area... I reckon rewrite em all. Like that synth around 6.10. Get some better drum sounds and you have some potential for a few good tracks. 
Bloody hell, thats a well long tune! nice1
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19-11-2007 09:21 |
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Phalanx
Chronologic
Registration Date: 13-09-2007
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Around 0:30 the drum pattern has a snare echo sound panned all the way over to my right ear. This sound is distracting.
The intro kick drum is a bit muddy, I don't think there is enough separation between the kick and snare patterns.
I dig the ambient sounds in the beginning sections, pretty haunting feel, very cool.
At 1:45 I think the kick is a bit heavy and overwhelms the beat. After the drop the drums comes in at an illogical time compared to the main bass. I think you should give the bass a full measure or two so that the drums come in on the beat.
I like the bass sounds around 3 minutes, really cool in an odd way.
I agree with the earlier comments about a consistent flow for the track, it seems like a lot of good ideas pieced together, but no direction.
I'm also trying to break into DnB as well, what you have so far seems promising 
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19-11-2007 09:57 |
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alternate force
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Registration Date: 23-01-2009
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like this track , nice !!! liked the old skool bassline bits here and there , loads of variations , overall wicked !!!!!
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19-11-2007 13:28 |
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