 OBLIVION12 - champion soundz |
OBLIVION12 
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'champion soundz' and post your comments here!!!
still work in progress. this is a jump-up/head nodding drum and bass tune i have made. i used making waves, loads of pluggins t-racks, please let me know what you think any feedback bad or good will be gratefully recieved, thanx
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17-11-2007 19:19 |
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CULTURE BOY
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Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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what sequencer u using mate? beats need more layers n stuff but i can hear where ya coming from. ya sounds are very jungle 97 style. bass sample ya got going on is very nice also what bass vst ya using? big ups from the cb
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17-11-2007 21:47 |
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darkstar
Amateur DnB Producer
Registration Date: 11-10-2007
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Interesting track. You have the Spor way about you, see how many sounds you can fit into one bar. Don't take this offensively, it is a compliment. I am on the other end of the spectrum, wishing that I could do that.
Personally, I think this track has potential but it has a long way to go. It's got some good sounds but you're lacking heavily in bass and that's what I got told was paramount (I wonder if he can remember who he is... lol)
Apart from that, the track is a goodie. It is clear that you have a large sample library, so you should have no trouble making tracks well into the future.
Just one word though, have a listen back to it and see what you might be able to level a bit better. EQ might be a good thing to look at too. Your drums don't have room to breathe in the mix.
Great track though. Well done.
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18-11-2007 02:10 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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ello there !
Nice oldskool flow in it specially in intro ,every thing seems to be well levelled ,very good beats and bass lines ,like the vibe,about 2nd minute you punch in with some breake and it feels a bit louder then the rest.Overall very decent track cool ideas in it.
bigup.
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18-11-2007 04:44 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah, old skool favours in there. Pretty random stuff going on, tonnes of different sounds... very interesting to listen to but hard to groove to. Sounds like 3 or 4 track's worth of material crammed into one track - a little like those Radio 1 5-min mixes. Not neccessarily a bad thing, but I think you've overdone this one a little for me - the track needs a backbone to hold everything together, something which is constant through most of the track.
But yeah, lots of impressive sounds and textures. You certainly know your stuff and it shows. 
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18-11-2007 09:55 |
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2clix
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Dont really dig jump up but this is nice. the intro is sick, the vocal samples fit perfectly with the vibe, like the use of all the jungle type samples, def. champion sounding. The build up and break were executed in typical jump up fashion. There were alot of different bass patterns after the first drop, felt like a dj mixing tracks to me... and the bass didnt seem to catch my attention as well as a norml jump up track would, I think you love every sound you make and you want to put them all into one song because there so great and they are! but unfortunately the dnb gods wont let us just throw every sick sound we come up with in a track... I know, right, but thats cool because now you got like 3 traks you can make from that one you just made and appease the gods of dnb think im the worst reviewer ever! lol
keep it up
peace hombre
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18-11-2007 11:24 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Really has a great jump-up vibe going on. Main part sounds a bit clownsteppish, but that bass is not wicked enough to do this (don't get me wrong, I like clownstep). Drums are not convincing in this part. At 2' the bass changes and it's much better now, might want to use it like that all the time. There's too much chaos going on at times. You might want to set out a more simple and clear structure. Your drum patterns are often K---S---K---S--- which is a bit unusual in Dnb and it doesn't roll very well. You have some wicked sounds going on, but the track changes so often that it appears to be a mix :-)
You seem to know your stuff, but work those track structures for a higher score!
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18-11-2007 13:48 |
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