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Paracyte 
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Please check out my new track 'System Clear ' and post your comments here!!!
Hello earth people ,
Just finished the "System Clear" ,hope you enjoy it ,please post some comments.
thanks !
Big up !
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16-11-2007 15:57 |
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Tomos
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Reviewing as I listen, Jimmy C stylee... 
Opening bassline - whoah!!! Amazing sound, amazing melodies. Perfectly way to creat some big vibes. Love it.
"Music" female vocal - nice. Hear comes the drop... pretty good but that synth sound doesn't do it for me. Sounds a little flat, needs more growly bassness.
The shakers sound a little loud and there's a bit of distortion on the beats. Also, you may need to turn them down a tad. Nice snare tho - coming through really well. Clear and crisp.
2.40... ah, that sweet bassline again. 3.00... new synthline. Doesn't quite fit, imo. The melody is pretty good but it sounds like something from an Orbital track, it needs to have a darker vibe. Perhaps keep the melody but change the sound?
Brilliant breakdown at 4.30! Excellent!
Nice drop at 4.50, beats are sounding much better at this point. Synths are much better too, Prodigy kinda vibe. Nice.
Still don't like the sound of that synth at 5.10.
5.40... melody overload! Might be a good idea to take out one of the synths, they're all fighting for space a little.
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Overall, a decent tune. With a few adjustments could be a killer tune! It's defo got one of the best basslines I've heard in a long while!
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16-11-2007 19:30 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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errie intro, nice effect on intro bass. switches when it drops, tight rolling drums which sound good, synths work well midway through, would be a nice track to dj with, interesting all the way through didnt get bored with it, i would like the tune so much more if the bass was twisted up abit, certainly well produced but i personly dont like the was the drop switches at the beginning, prefered to hear the original bass sound contniue after drop, i like this though,well done, flows well and overall a nice tune. i like my tunes dark, i think this tune is good but needs to sound a bit darker, techno kind of sound, i look forward to hearing other tracks, i will keep my ears open
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17-11-2007 00:37 |
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Seven Gun
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wicked intro. lovely synths.
drop is a bit of a let down. bass seems a bit light.
liking when the filler beat comes in.
nice composition on this. cool tune.
could do with a heavier section or two, with more beats.
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17-11-2007 01:33 |
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Paracyte
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Thanks to ya all for the reviews ,think i will mess wit it a bit more some time ,but for now i will leave it like it is ,just want to clear this distortion which i just spotted.
Cheers peepz.
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17-11-2007 12:08 |
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equipped
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big Cheers , to drunk, will sort this tomorrow, the gin,
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17-11-2007 12:28 |
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Paracyte
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17-11-2007 18:10 |
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Paracyte
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18-11-2007 05:36 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Intro is very good. It is building nicely. Like someone said b4, drop is a let down.
Bass is a little weak, and I think the drum hits need to be fuller sounding. I don like the minimalist aspect of the drums though. Not a real exciting song really.
I hate that sci fi synth that comes in at about 2:55, a bit too cheesy.
Everything sits pretty well in the mix.
Not "alien" enough for this earth person 
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18-11-2007 07:35 |
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Paracyte
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18-11-2007 11:06 |
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Cheers Paracyte, grandma got the back hand, yur beats are tight, diggin the dark sounds, on me end there's forshure to much high end at part's in your mix, mainly when i crank it, diggin all the shuffly layer's, fav sound is that scratchy sound round 4:50, forshure gives it an edge, change at 4:03 is dam heafty too, maybe a big industrial sound over top that synth to beef it up a bit, , right then, heafty track Paracyte, allway's enjoy yur track's, big cheers.
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19-11-2007 02:55 |
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Paracyte
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Cheers eq, Glad you like it ,just a different track ,tryin to experiment with different shit ,too much high you said ? will check it ,thanks for review,safe mate.
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19-11-2007 03:12 |
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Paracyte
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bumpin the topic 
please ,anyone else to review ?
cheers.
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21-11-2007 05:34 |
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21-11-2007 10:46 |
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Paracyte
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Cheers Jimbo
thanks for review ,good to know u like it.
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23-11-2007 11:28 |
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