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brucifer 
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Track 2' and post your comments here!!!
Real rough demo. Just started this one. This track is being made using Reason 3. All the sounds are my own, except the vocal and one drum loop, which I am going to mash up drasticly! Any feedback appreciated. Thanks 
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15-11-2007 08:05 |
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big cheers, allway's a proper treat catchin a freshly posted track, big cheers ol man Bruce, this be the D Step's in full, diggin all yur heafty sounds, yur last last tune yu posted was a ripper, mix again is rough, sounds perty bad overall, but your ideas, beat's, sounds, are all rippers's, forshure diggin it, dutty tune, big cheers.
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15-11-2007 08:20 |
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BattleDrone
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Some sick sounds going on in there.
Drumrythm is not really rolling (it's a bit between DnB and dubstep). Still lacks structure, there's no real build up. (sub)Bass action required. You might want to cut down a bit on reverb and panning of some elements, it depends on the final track though.
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15-11-2007 09:39 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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THanks for listening! Is this dubstep? 
I don't really know what it is. Over the last couple of years, I've been a bit disconnected with what is what... Mainly, cos I don't live around London now days and am currently living in NZ. I was actually trying to get the feel of an old Ed Rush track, Can't remember the name (cos got it on white), but think its the b side of 'Force is Electric' on NO U Turn. 
As I said above. This is a very rough demo, that is why there is no real structure to the track. Basically, I was more experimenting to see how my sounds go together. I know the beat is a bit half time, but I really wanted to try writing something without the amen. I was thinking of starting the track at a normal tempo and dropping it down to that doomy sort of speed in the middle for a bit of contrast.
So it sounds real rough again!?!! I think I'm going to have to look around for a new stereo.... I would upload a pic of my set up, but we got burgled recently and I had my camera stollen. 
They left my laptop and stereo, so that is probably a good indication!
Thanks again and also to everyone else who gives a listen
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15-11-2007 10:39 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, impressive sounds, real potential to make a great tune out of them but you've still got a lot of work to do on the mix because there's too much reverb and distortion going on. The beats are good but they are not really coming through well. They're too muddy and they're being drowned out by the other effects which are really distorted and loud... but like you said, it's a very rough mix.
This preview seems to be lacking some fat bass stabs.
Yep, definite old Ed Rush vibe here, love it. (If only he would doing stuff like this again eh?!).
Looking forward to the final version cos this has got real potential.
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16-11-2007 19:12 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Thanks for listening.I will get on to the real thing soon. I would like to say that I am disapointed with the amount of people listening and not giving any feedback. What is that about? Even if you don't like it, just say so and why. If you review my stuff, I will review yours...
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17-11-2007 17:46 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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sounds good man, real dark, need more bass though, like all the soundz, twisted! needs some sub bass
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17-11-2007 20:47 |
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