drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Timmi - Laggin' Timmi - Laggin' Author Post Timmi Atmos T (aka Timmi) Registration Date: 04-11-2007 Posts: 207 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Laggin'' and post your comments here!!! This is a jump up track, probaly one of my faveorite tracks that i have produced. I use reason mainly. the tracks had a bit of support from some leicester djs (big ups 2 test + bmradio.co.uk) and I just wana get my tracks out in the big wide world, basically. Let me know what you think. Timmi __ www.myspace.com/atmostuk Atmos T - You See Me EP Out now 4 free download ** http://www.sendspace.com/file/6q3frj ** 13-11-2007 15:20 Rudeone love & light Registration Date: 15-10-2005 Posts: 926 Helpfulness rating:  good intro. drums could need some tuning. soundin a bit thin, more ghosts. tune doesnt built up to well. theme is a bit weak. drop doesnt drop. needs more goin on. sound/mix is pretty clear. sounds like you're on a good way. cheers ruv __ MySpace 13-11-2007 16:32 lead:end straight up beastin' Registration Date: 10-08-2006 Posts: 138 Helpfulness rating:  i don't really agree with the term jump up for this one, it's kinda slow imo..eq'ing is nice thoug.. __ manic depression is only a lame excuse fo being emo. 13-11-2007 17:19 Binary Havoc Binary Havoc Registration Date: 25-07-2007 Posts: 730 Helpfulness rating:  Hey Like the intro, kind of reminds me of the sort of intro I'd do Snare is a bit too loud IMO and the kick maybe a bit too between the 2 of them they kind of smother the beats. Still dug the tune overall though man. Is that rule about only postin 1 tune a week still in effect?? If so postin 2 in a row is a bit obvious. Decent tunes though Kepp em comin Peace BH __ http://soundcloud.com/binaryhavoc/dropbox 13-11-2007 19:58 Tomos Infidel Registration Date: 15-04-2007 Posts: 2,276 Helpfulness rating:  Love the build-up melody. Nice sounds. However, there are 1 or 2 notes in the intro lead synth melody which are out of tune. Nice fat beats. That kick defo reminds me of Shinyuri's kicks - he's a Reason arse bandit too. (only joking Shinster ). Nice snare. Cool bass sounds. Needs a better melody tho - after a while it gets too repetitive. You need to mix it up a bit. Overall, a decent tune that needs a bit of development on the main melodies. __ MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook "It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan 13-11-2007 21:40 Timmi Atmos T (aka Timmi) Registration Date: 04-11-2007 Posts: 207 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks for all your comments. On future tracks im gonna work on gettin a bit more variation. I do usually use more ghosts in the drums, and the snare is a bit loud but i was trying to get a punchier sound. Any ideas how to tidy up the drums but keepin em punchy? I didn't realise you were only meant 2 post 1 track a week max, im new to drumnbass.be, sorry bout that. Thanks again. Timmi __ www.myspace.com/atmostuk Atmos T - You See Me EP Out now 4 free download ** http://www.sendspace.com/file/6q3frj ** 13-11-2007 22:24 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  The intro sounds a bit like some synth track from Vangelis :-) Again muffled drums, they need to be more upfront and compressed imo. You sure know what you are doing though. Nice wobbler, especially the middle part with the high melodies is nice. The parts with just the wobble bass and the drums tend to get boring. For a track of this length a few extra elements could make it more entertaining. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 13-11-2007 23:36 Shinyuri myspace.com/shinyuribeats Registration Date: 05-01-2007 Posts: 422 Helpfulness rating:  easy nice atmos intro - yeh a couple of notes maybe out of key but then it kinda fits too. besides its drum n bass! lovely bass on the drop! liking it - the change ups on it is cool too. lovely stuff! thats an awesome bass drum too!!! u gotta love reason! i mean come on - fruity loops? thats just a silly name anyways - just a tad of eqing would sort out things here i reckon - the bass drum and the snare kind of muffle each other on the first drop. lovely solid stuff though mans. keep on it. if ur interested in a collab - gimme a shout - like ur style __ www.myspace.com/shinyuribeats revel in the crapness of the website and then hit the add button... go on, do it, u know u wanna 14-11-2007 11:57 Rudeone love & light Registration Date: 15-10-2005 Posts: 926 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Tomos there are 1 or 2 notes in the intro lead synth melody which are out of tune. everything's spot on to me __ MySpace 14-11-2007 12:06 Rudeone love & light Registration Date: 15-10-2005 Posts: 926 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Timmi Any ideas how to tidy up the drums but keepin em punchy? layering and decent equing __ MySpace 14-11-2007 12:08 OBLIVION12 Producer Registration Date: 16-11-2007 Posts: 80 yeah i like this one, i like the squelchy bassline and the computerized synths near the end, heavy sounding snare! a good track to mix on the decks,good work OBLIVION12 18-11-2007 16:39 TEST Producer Registration Date: 25-09-2007 Posts: 66 been rinsen dis for a while now..... probly needs a lil here or there but im keen! big ups TIMMI. 19-11-2007 18:33 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Like the filtering and all on the bassline, but it needs reEQing, and I really dislike your snare. Also add some more edits to your beats! __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 19-11-2007 21:19 Shunyatta Producer Registration Date: 28-11-2007 Posts: 24 Your snare is a lil bit too heavy at the beginning, although when the bassline comes in (very nice bassline btw) it seems to fit in just perfect. The structure isn't bad, but I guess some new sounds coming in in the last 2 minutes would be really benefic for the track. My favorite aspect of the track is really the bassline, really dig it Keep at it. 30-11-2007 12:12 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Timmi - Laggin'