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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Promise' and post your comments here!!!
This track is a lil bit easier. Mellow. Just listen and let your soul flow with the rhythm and melodies
hope u gonna like it...I am still working on it, tweaking here and there...hope you will give good advice.
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11-11-2007 23:04 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Panning on bass is not a good idea, keep the bass mono. The bass sound is top notch though. The cymbal is a bit too loud.
Weird choice of sounds, but it seems to work, could be improved by chosing better sounds I think. Sounds a bit like trance, which is not a bad thing in this case, it's not cheesy.
Good stuff, work on it some more. I expect the track to continue with a slamming lead on top of the stuff from the middle part (like around 2:15).
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12-11-2007 00:21 |
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Lightningflash
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not stang enough for me but Id lower the HH volum
and rase the snare a bit,
like the moody pads though.
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12-11-2007 22:56 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, nice intro. I have to agree about the bass - it's never a good idea to pan the main bass.
Melody and chord changes at .50 are excellent!! So too are the synths at 1.06!! Corrr, gorgeous! However, the overall sound is a little weak - needs more power and drama.
Tracks flows nicely and progresses very smoothly. Looove this deep vibes in this one. Would be nice to hear a little soft, tender vocal in there. Not too loud, and with lots of chilled atmosphere.
Liiiike it mate!
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13-11-2007 20:45 |
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wrm
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thx guys for replies
2Tomos: my mate is working on some vocals into this track so I hope it will end up well. I will keep u updated
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13-11-2007 21:11 |
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Shinyuri
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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easy, liking this track man - sweet melodies, cool drumming, agree with the bass panning and the comment bout the vocals - cant wait to see what you put on it.
anyways - the bass which comes in at round 1.28 - i would prefer a couple more edits on it - maybe some filtering etc.
otherwise a cool track mans
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14-11-2007 11:24 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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I have to say theres some deff thought that went into this... a lil un orthodox but good... keep it up..
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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15-11-2007 17:26 |
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