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stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'choose me' and post your comments here!!!
this is a track that i made at the beginning of last summer. ive messed around with it alot, but im still not satisfied with it.
any comments or suggestions are welcome.
cheers dnb.be heads.
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10-11-2007 03:05 |
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equipped
tired
Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Big cheers Bubbly, hope all is well in Bubbly town, solid mix fat man, diggin the ol analogly lead, heafty dutty big thick smooth drop, big dutty production fat man, yur track's are allway's a big treat, big ol sloppy cheers.
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10-11-2007 10:21 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Fat beats, love them!! Lovely smooth melodies!!! Definitely my kinda vibe. I don't like that string-type synth tho which starts at .24, sounds really flat. Melody is great tho, just needs a different sound. The bass at 1.30 is too loud - drowns out everything else. But again, excellent melody. Looove those synth stabs at 1.53!! Vocals are pretty good but they need a bit more soul and go out of tune slightly during one or two points. Excellent high-pitched synths, that melody is really infectious.
What software are you using btw??
Niiiiiiiic track! 
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10-11-2007 10:56 |
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Timmi
Atmos T (aka Timmi)
Registration Date: 04-11-2007
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On the whole I do like this track, i like the chords of the piano and the synth melodies, but i think that when the intro is about to finish and the bass brought in that the drums could have more of a build up maybe just on their own which may make more anticipation towards the drop. When the bass is brought in the vocals and various melodies at the same time, instead they could be brought in later to create more of a build up and more variation. So overall I think the sounds in the track work really well (I really like the flow of the drums by the way), and I think its just the structure of the track which needs changing, which would create a good atmosphere on the dance floor. Big ups. Timmi
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11-11-2007 01:21 |
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declar8
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Registration Date: 10-11-2007
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One of the slickest tracks I've heard on drumnbass.be!!!
Lovely vocal parts (good to see/hear more than a single vocal sample looped over and over and over...)
Seems to need a bit more direction though. You are on the right track tough. The good bits are really good but each section doesn't flow into the next well enough... or they all sound very similar.
The beats could be more dynamic and a little less repetitive. Try cutting out the first beat of the first bar every now and again (like and anti-drop)
Needs some phat bass lines earlier in the track (40 sec in) + Drop out some elements when you have your bass lines running, this track runs at full intensity from 1:28 onward, although at the 2:56 min mark it flattens out a bit and sounds more melodic.
Nice interlude at 4 min mark and the next drop is great. This is a real floor shaker, I’m very envious!!!
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13-11-2007 08:18 |
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Shinyuri
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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mate this tune is fukin awesome,
a definate summer tune, chilled times on a beach perving over girls that you wont be able to pull cos u got a beer gut. excellent!
anyways - my missus really likes this track and she hates dnb! this would definately get the women goin. Good fukin job!
yeh - the bass was a little quirky first time listening to it but on my 4th time listening to this tune (sorry got sidetracked..hehe) it fits nice. maybe a couple more edits on it but otherwise a solid tune man
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13-11-2007 11:58 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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good starting progression..the drop is a bit typical... or a lil distorted on the low end... the tc sound is getting out there but its not fresh anymore... take the sub and phase the fuck out of it, bring it back to mono and automate slow phasing over top.. youll get that nice liquid eb and flow of teh bassline...
also you gotta change some structure... its good to repeat your measures, just add and lose some things here and there, but dont change tyhe bass or the synth melodies...evolve the percusion...
just my 2 cents... great idea in here...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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15-11-2007 17:36 |
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