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Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Parallel Atmosphere ver.1.0' and post your comments here!!!

i have been listening to BSE recently and have got some ideas, ive also been working on bass ideas.

any ideas on improvements are welcome and thanked

made with reason 3.0



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09-11-2007 23:34 Homepage of Uberchile
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nice and dark.

i like that reece your using. sounds sweet.

drums are a bit tinny and light. it would sound nice with a big deep kick and snare layered in there.

cool melody.

cheers!



10-11-2007 03:21
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Super intro!! That saw bass needs spicing up a bit tho, it's pretty bog standard. Great use of FX and rides in the intro. Here comes the drop... pretty good but I'd defo agree with stickbubbly that the beats need beefing up, especially the kick. It's really lightweight. The reese bass is not bad but again needs spicing up with some extra flavours. The breakdown in the middle is pretty long but I don't find that a problem cos it's good! Not too keen on that mid-range synthline... the melody is good enough but it's got the wrong kinda sound, imo. The track needs some variation towards the end I reckon, perhaps you should try incorporating a few new sounds or switching the melody a bit. Apart from that, a decent tune! Nice one.

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10-11-2007 10:41 Homepage of Tomos
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Got some sinister vibes going....can tell you've been listen to teh BSE Big Grin

get a sweeping notch filter on that Reese.....

drop is pretty good, agree with others, drums need more BEEF!

Get a nice weighty kick on there.....

not too keen on that synth that comes in over the reese @ 2.40

second drop was a little weak, kinda falls into it.....

Sorry if i'm seeming harsh but i sometimes am on the tracks i really think could go somewhere Big Grin

If you fancy it...self contain the reason song file and send it over to me and i'll have a go at a remix Drummer

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13-11-2007 11:12 Homepage of D2o
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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deifnately agree with the tomos about all his comments - the intro is fukin fantastic - maybe the quiet bit before the drop is a tad too long but thats my opinion only.

yeh that second melody im not really digging but i reckon u could use that in another tune.

anyway about the drop - i reckon go more mental - but otherwise the drums do need beefing.

anyways, bags of potential this tune mate, keep at it

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13-11-2007 11:47 Homepage of Shinyuri
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Uberchile...you need to enable PM's so i can message you back Wink

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13-11-2007 23:01 Homepage of D2o
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