Uberchile - Parallel Atmosphere ver.1.0 |
Uberchile
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Registration Date: 14-05-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Parallel Atmosphere ver.1.0' and post your comments here!!!
i have been listening to BSE recently and have got some ideas, ive also been working on bass ideas.
any ideas on improvements are welcome and thanked
made with reason 3.0
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09-11-2007 23:34 |
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stickbubbly
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nice and dark.
i like that reece your using. sounds sweet.
drums are a bit tinny and light. it would sound nice with a big deep kick and snare layered in there.
cool melody.
cheers!
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10-11-2007 03:21 |
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Tomos
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Super intro!! That saw bass needs spicing up a bit tho, it's pretty bog standard. Great use of FX and rides in the intro. Here comes the drop... pretty good but I'd defo agree with stickbubbly that the beats need beefing up, especially the kick. It's really lightweight. The reese bass is not bad but again needs spicing up with some extra flavours. The breakdown in the middle is pretty long but I don't find that a problem cos it's good! Not too keen on that mid-range synthline... the melody is good enough but it's got the wrong kinda sound, imo. The track needs some variation towards the end I reckon, perhaps you should try incorporating a few new sounds or switching the melody a bit. Apart from that, a decent tune! Nice one.
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10-11-2007 10:41 |
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Shinyuri
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deifnately agree with the tomos about all his comments - the intro is fukin fantastic - maybe the quiet bit before the drop is a tad too long but thats my opinion only.
yeh that second melody im not really digging but i reckon u could use that in another tune.
anyway about the drop - i reckon go more mental - but otherwise the drums do need beefing.
anyways, bags of potential this tune mate, keep at it
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13-11-2007 11:47 |
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D2o
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13-11-2007 23:01 |
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