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coddy
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Registration Date: 25-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Too True' and post your comments here!!!
This is clown vs tech.
Made from a base of the intro vibes made by my mate Mrcheviuos.
Took me two nights work for this.
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07-11-2007 12:48 |
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Shinyuri 
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some nice sounds you got goin on there. it sounds like you could make 2 songs out of it tho.
oooh like the drop at 2.29. i rekon this should be the main tune imo. sounds a bit disjointed with the intro but hey thats personal taste a bit.
anyways the production quality is sweet as man. the bass is nice and phat, the drums are cool and punchy, generally sounding sweet as. nice work bruv
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07-11-2007 13:15 |
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coddy
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thanks
first post so great to have instant feed back
reckon i might be ready for signing??
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07-11-2007 13:19 |
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BattleDrone
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The intro is too long/ not enough is happening in it. The lead melody is not my cup of tea (instrument and melody). The tra sounds more like elektro than clown or tech. The whole thing needs to be more "catchy", it lacks structure it's just a sequence of different parts rather than a structured song. Some vocal element would do no harm either.
The EQing is not too bad, but could improve quite a bit, the whole thing is very much centered and some parts sound muddy (e.g. past 4 minutes).
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07-11-2007 18:33 |
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Tomos
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Hmm, pretty good. Nice melodies and vibes. But like Shin and Battle have already said, the sound needs some attention and so does the structure. It sounds like you've pieced different parts together rather than incorporating various elements (like FX, melodies) at different stages of the track and changing them.
Some nice work with the filtered kicks in the build-ups. They work really well here. Basslines are nice, but I reckon they need to sound more edgy and dirty.They are too 'safe' for me at the mo, but that's personal.
It's not quite there yet, but definitely some good stuff going on. Keep at it Codster! 
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07-11-2007 19:27 |
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Lightningflash
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kik needs a punch
snares a bit trebly possibly d HH too
but nice beat
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09-11-2007 00:02 |
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equipped
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cheers Coddy, heafty dutty tune, forshure diggin that background sound u use constant right up till the 2:30, add's allot, synth's sound dry at parts, id be bouncin with some lfo, delay, flange ect, and maybe some extra dist, the spicey effect's, this a well written track, moves heafty, allway's building, nice work, cheers.
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