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Nick ZZ 
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Please check out my new track 'Corner of Your Eye' and post your comments here!!!
Nick and Erina Z- Corner of your Eye
Descrïption:
This song is about the things you see and pass off as your imagination. Our neighbor Zed was kind enough to recite the poem we wrote and the humming in the intro and second verse is Erina Z. If you want to RMX it please let us know. Thanks.
http://www.musicv2.com/artist/nick-and-erina-z
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07-11-2007 08:05 |
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Shinyuri
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haunting intro! nice use of all the delay effects too.
sweet drums when they kik in. evil effetcs man. where u get them from?
sweet bass. could do with a tad more 70hz i rekon tho.
overall this track has got a general evil feel to it - i like!
what does the dude say in the poem?
anyways, definate head bopper.
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07-11-2007 09:22 |
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Nick ZZ
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Thanks for the listen brutha, glad you like it. Here is the poem. Cheers. Z
-out corner of your eye
-undefined elusive images streek through darkness
-a momentary pause
-it's always the same question you asked yourself countless time before
-you ca't deney the existance or the feeling
-you can try to look again, it won't reapear
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07-11-2007 18:21 |
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BattleDrone
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Sounds promising, the whole thing (drums and bass) need some editing to make it all roll even more than it already does. Also the buildup could be tighter, with a clear story running in the track. The track seems to start and then has a new drop at 1:47 which is quite soon. The drums could be a bit more in-yo-face (maybe compress them some more?)
Sound quality is good.
The pads in the first drop are too much on 1 side (stereo field).
The main part of the track needs more variation.
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07-11-2007 18:39 |
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Tomos
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Yep, this is impressive! Tight throughout, massive main basslines and solid beats. Niiiicce! That poem is a touch of brilliance, it's so haunting and the voice with the effects fits perfectly. I love those female vocals which appear towards the end of the track too!
Only a few things need tweaking I reckon - the intro is a little long winded with too many silences. That sort of vibe would work excellently on a movie but I think it needs to be shorter for this kinda tune. The beats need a bit more muscle on them, especially the kick. Snare needs to hit a bit harder too.
Apart from that, this is proper decent tune!! Well done! 
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"It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan
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07-11-2007 18:59 |
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goonybag
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pretty scary stuff. maybe just a little bare in the intro, needs a few more elements there to fill it out imo. nice dist bass stabs throughout give it a "tuff" feel. there are some nice dirty synths in the main drop, at this point i feel the beat should progress a little more it seems to similar to the intro, change it up and seperate it and i think the dropwill have more impact and really smash people. For me the synths and bass sounds are wicked, the type i love in dnb, but id work the beats a little more. good bloody effort.
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07-11-2007 23:40 |
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theaudiodemon
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Easy, good tune mate, beats need compressing though.
Nice variation, not too sure about the 2nd drop.
Would defo hook up on the rmx on this one if your up for it...
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08-11-2007 11:13 |
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wTrouble
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Mommy! Heeeeeeeeeeelp meeeeeee!
Scary biscuits movie style fx/vocs in the intro intro!
Nice ruffage on the stabs!
As above, the drop at 1:47 seems a bit soon. Maybe have the intro go all the way to the drop rather than dropping at 1:04 and 1:47 - its just that the section doesn't feel long enough and the drop would have more impact if you dropped the big guns at 2:08 straight after the intro.
Drums could do with coming through a touch more too. Maybe some more cymbol air.
Fucking nice, I like! Big up!
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09-11-2007 01:56 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by Jimmy C
Typical intro from you guys.....sinister
beat came out of nowhere...me like though
NIce rough distortion on the bass....is that hardware distortion?
This is cool stuff....like had been said the beats need beefing up a touch and maybe fill them out with some nice ride action or a break with some cymbols in
good stuff people.....keep it up 
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Guitar Rig 2 & 3 for dist, the Access Virus Ti does have some decent dist as well. Thanks for the advice as always. We will work on beefen up our drumz a bit; do we need more low or mid layers on the drumz? Thanks. Z
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22-11-2007 03:07 |
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22-11-2007 08:42 |
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Nick ZZ
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