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Shinyuri 
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Please check out my new track 'THC (tyler hill camp)' and post your comments here!!!
easy now dnb heads!
this is just a tune that ive been working on these last few days. its made from inspiration pulled from a t shirt that someone im chilling with constantly wears.
anyways, feedback much appreciated
peace
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07-11-2007 05:56 |
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equipped
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Big cheers Shinyuri, a heafty tune & thick production, big bubbly synth's a treat, big thick chunk, great beat's, big flow, this a heafty track, big cheers.
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07-11-2007 06:32 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ Shin
Nice melodies gwarn in the intro
Drops cool. Your style all over this tune man.
Think the crazy lead is a little bit too upfront and could probably do with sittin back a touch. Maybe stick in a bit more of a normal synth in the low mid playing the simple melodic progression to back it up a bit.
Tune
Peace
BH
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07-11-2007 18:35 |
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BattleDrone
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That must be some smashing t-shirt you stared at man. Track is very well structured and entertaining, lovely melodies! The vocal is too much muffled in the back. The whole thing sounds like it is clipping like hell though, check your levels please. The overall sound quality suffers big time from this. Although the track is very well strucktured and the melodies feel great, the track would really benefit from a part with a good hook, for example a middle part with a different synth that would play a more dominant melody which is very catchy (I don't think you would have a problem creating such a thing when I hear the stuff you are actually capable off).
Great tune, bit of work to be done on the levels, mastering and a mainlead in the middle and it is top notch.
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07-11-2007 18:51 |
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Tomos
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The Shinster hits again! Some wicked melodies going on in this track mate. Good structure with nice flowing elements throughout. Nothing feels forced and laboured - that's the sign of a good song writer. Trademark Shinster filtered beat edits and build-ups. It's all sweet shizzle to me.
But I have to agree with Battle - the sound still needs a bit of work. On the louder stuff you can really hear the sound starting to crunch and distort, especially on those filtered kick build-ups. The synths are pretty good but the sound gets a little mashed at times. I reckon you should layer a slightly gritty bassline underneath it to give it more drive. It's a bit "synthy" at the mo. Yeah, would be nice to hear the vocals a bit clearer.
But yeah, apart that this is a hellava tune!!!
Please thank your mate on my behalf for that t-shirt would ya. 
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07-11-2007 19:16 |
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there are some cool synths in the intro, ooooooooh, nice drop, not what was expected but lovely none the less. the drop at 1:45 would lift the roof! Fuck yeh! I really like this part has good use of synths filling out the spectrum with a solid beat, pulsates for sure. your production is impressive,overall this track has a nice polished feel to it, a good "sheen". Another good point, I think what you do with your drums is great, there are lots of subtle elements going on there that keeps it all interesting. Big up Shinyuri, cant fault it as it sounds sweet.
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07-11-2007 23:55 |
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Shinyuri
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nice one for the comments u lot - just checked it out on the .be player and it is clipping like hell innit!! i will sort the levels out and repost - maybe its got somink to do with the tune being at 192kbs or somink. maybe that and my ears are destroyed after playing the drums too much!
yeh its a bit synthy too - i might try and add another melody in there, maybe - this tune is about some cheeky woman who i know - i dunno if a darker gritty b line would fit it cos she dont fit it! ill mess round with it anyways.
once again cheers for all the comments lads. much appreciated.
peace
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08-11-2007 05:17 |
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BattleDrone
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Originally posted by Shinyuri
this tune is about some cheeky woman who i know - i dunno if a darker gritty b line would fit it cos she dont fit it!
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08-11-2007 20:29 |
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stickbubbly
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nice synth at the start. i think it could use some low end though.
nice drop. good melody.
lots of stuff goin on in this track. sounds good.
nice one.
cheers.
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10-11-2007 02:17 |
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Seven Gun
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havent listened just yet but i know shinyuri is BIIIG!!!
respect sir!
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10-11-2007 02:21 |
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Seven Gun
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intro is very nice. the melody is cool.
could maybe use a filtered break to tease a bit more.
pure shinyuri style, electro-funk-dnb.
kick could use a bit more punch.
lovely electro synths with.
nice tune man.
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