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philbee philbee is a male
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Please check out my new track '01869(drop clip)' and post your comments here!!!

easy peeps
bin in the lab to day funkin about
my brainz been a bit baron for ideas then this kinda popped in
trying for a fuller more rounded sound on this one
anywayz blah blah blah no intro yet so ive just stuck up the patterns ive written today
its only short but any feedbac is recieved gratefully and gracefully
peace and love to the DOTBE family


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06-11-2007 19:33 Homepage of philbee
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Yeeahh, totally feeling the vibe on this little clip!! Of course, it's early days yet but that bassline needs a lot of work. The melody and effects are fuckin excellent but the sound really needs beefing up. Its needs to dominate the sound a lot more and tear people's heads off. Perhaps there's a tad too much effect on it cos it breaks up in parts - might sound better with a slightly cleaner sound.

Beats are really, really sweet... reminds me of some Noisia stuff. Rockin Sounding a little muffled through my headphones tho. You might wanna brighten them up a touch.

But you're definitely onto something here bud... another massive tune!! Big Grin

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06-11-2007 19:50 Homepage of Tomos
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ooh lovin it. flowin ultradeep. work this one!!

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06-11-2007 20:18 Homepage of Rudeone
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Got it running for half an hour now and it still doesn't bore me.
Drums are spot on, their pattern is repetitive, but it doesn't bore if there is enough other action.
Like Tomos said, the bass needs some attention. There seems to be some really low volume pads going on in the back or? Should be lifted a bit maybe, I can barely hear them.

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06-11-2007 23:27 Homepage of BattleDrone
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feeling this little number mate.

Deffo got a sort of gridlok type vibe running in this.

Few things i think would make it better.....

Snare needs some fizzle fo shizzle me nizzle

that warpping bass is good but needs more bite maybe layer same synth pitched an octave down???

I think some edgey orchestral type stabs would fit this imo, you know the sort that are in lost.

And obviously some fills, drills, variation etc etc.

Nice start man, wicked in fact

Wish i could make something good at the mo.......inspiration is DRY

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07-11-2007 00:22 Homepage of D2o
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aside from the obvious problems (muffled beat and no "rest of the song") this shit is really great, love the ghost drums in the mix. the bass is cool, but i don't know about the upbeat (offbeat) bass hits unless they had lower cutoff freq. really good ideas in this one Drummer
07-11-2007 01:53
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Personaly, not over keen on the drums. They sound a bit flat to me. I think a sharper snare would make a vast difference. I think possible it could do with a break at the end aswell, just to make it a bit more interesting. I also reckon it would sound better if it had some sort of pad, to give it a bit more depth to the track, or maybe a haunting style vocal. Something maybe to experiment with. You could possibly bring up the background sound effects so you don't need to struggle to hear them, that would make the track more interesting. Could be good, just needs more time spent on it.

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07-11-2007 03:18
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggg
ggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

finish this one quick sharp!!!! fukin love it!! got a real cool dirty rave feeling on this one, bass and drums are cool as fuk - do agree with the tomos about the bass tho.

finish it!!!!

then send me a copy Wink

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07-11-2007 05:02 Homepage of Shinyuri
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EZ Phil

this is groovin mate Rinse

Think the drums definately need some work on the crispy factor but sort them out and this'll be another massive tune man.

Nice one

BH

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07-11-2007 18:30 Homepage of Binary Havoc
philbee philbee is a male
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cheers 4 da feeds
yep @tomos yah right...just checked it out and the reese line i had runnin under neath the main bass was tottaly out of key Huh hence makin the other main bass sound jumpy..worked on it today sounds alot better
so i shall be re-postin it soon
anywayz cheers for the feeds boyz

anymore?
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07-11-2007 20:24 Homepage of philbee
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