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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'November' and post your comments here!!!
Long time no see for the site... heres a freebie... enjoy!
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03-11-2007 21:04 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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Feelin this one..
Funny when i think about how you sounded once.. alot has changed..
Bigup yourself
Enjoyed this free shizzle.. 
Excellent clean production , expect nothin less form you these dayz..
Peace
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03-11-2007 22:20 |
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hardplnsdrftr
Streetcleaner
Registration Date: 07-03-2006
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Very high production quality. Sounds good.
Intro synth is a little cheesy IMO.
Bongos are excellent.
A bit boring to my ears overall. I think it needs to change up more often to add interest. A bit of sameness permeates. No surprises whatsoever. Doesnt have to be shocking, just a few unexpected moments.
Very nice elements though.
Just change it up a bit at times, I like surprises.
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Søren Kierkegaard
http://www.myspace.com/hardplainsdrifter
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04-11-2007 07:11 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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hardplnsdrftr has put it perfectly I reckon. It's got a nice clean, tight sound but it's quite predictable and forgettable. The structure and style is very dance orientated which is not usually my thing but it'll appeal to others. You definitely need to turn off the synthline as some stage in this track - probably the middle - cos it plays right through till the end and becomes tiresome. What about an ambient or dirtyish change up in the middle with a big bassline? It's really lacking bass at the mo. The beats are a little flat too. Again, they've got a great sound with lots of tight rolls, edits and fills but it's all too predictable. Put in some suprises and changes and you've got yourself a wicked tune!!
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04-11-2007 09:29 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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I was expecting the synth line to drop at some point but the fact it doesnt gives the track a deeper feel. Having a change-up halfway through with a dirty bassline taking over now that would be predictable imo...
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04-11-2007 12:05 |
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Shinyuri
myspace.com/shinyuribeats
Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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production quality is bad boy on this one. the high ends sound real clean like and the drums hav got that nice phatness to them. samples are sweet, effects are good too.
yeh sos tomos and harplnsdrftr, im with glim on this one.
this is one of those tunes which is better without a ridiculous mental drop i rekon. its got that dancey feel which dont warrant a big drop into a hard synth. i like the fact that it dont do that. good chilled vibes cos of it too. cool choon!
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revel in the crapness of the website and then hit the add button... go on, do it, u know u wanna
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04-11-2007 12:54 |
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sourone
Newbie
Registration Date: 03-11-2007
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this track have a tons of air and atomsphere and big pack of higher frequencies...percussion plays very nice...bongos, snares, hats.. ...everythings fits here and i can hear that u put a lot of work and emotions to this track...but in my opinion it lacks of lower and middle low frequencies a little...u have to give it more "meat"...i think that kick should be more powerfull(but that's only my opinion) or equalize sub bas 
...arrangment is really pro...but as i said ,if you enchance lower frequencies it will be a lot better...
overall, sound is clear and track is very cool and entertaining ,but it lacks of "meat"
keep working
cheers
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04-11-2007 15:27 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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its deff interesteing seeing your guys' feedback... glad youre liking it...
sourone youre a bit off on teh lower mid frequencies... all dnb tunes dont need a huge mud bassline to make it a good track...
other heads are a bit more on teh right track as far as it being dancefloor... simple works... simple gets signed... if you dont beleive me ask DOC from teh states, signed on 31 etc... proper...
its all about harmonies and drive in this... 3 note chord with 2 slighty diff harmonic lines overtop...
also something that ive learned from some pros is keep it moving without doing anything to it... ie (rides, congos, etc) add percussion...
big ups on the reviews... the stars are a shame, but in the end quality wins...
keep em coming
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15-11-2007 17:30 |
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Shunyatta
Producer
Registration Date: 28-11-2007
Posts: 24
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I really dig the bongos on this, very well done.
High production values on this track, it has really good quality, in that aspect you rock. Now if you wanna tickle my ears the right way, you have to bring some exciting moments into it, not too abrupt, somethin like what happens at 3:40, but happening more often and just a lil bit dynamic. and I'm not too fond of the synth you have from beginning to end. It's nice at the beginning, but if you put all troughout the track it gets a bit annoying, you could even change the melody on the same synth, that wouldn't sound bad I believe 
Nice work though! Keep it up bro 
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30-11-2007 12:31 |
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