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collective 
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Please check out my new track 'night stalking' and post your comments here!!!
ok just started this this morning
only a little bit so far lots to do on it
bline will be changed as im not over keen on it
any advice on it would be nice ta .be peeps
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03-11-2007 12:12 |
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BattleDrone
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The bassline is indeed not really great. Instrument is ok though. Drums are good, also very much variation going on. One drum pattern fails to "roll" though (around 40").
Work it!
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03-11-2007 12:56 |
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tryptech
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drums are okee
reminds me of earlier work of krust
production is oke
but not
floorstamping
greetz
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03-11-2007 13:41 |
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Tomos
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Not bad but the sound obviously needs a lot of work, especially the beats. They are very thin sounding. Nice edits tho. Melodies - yeah, pretty nice but they are lacking real atmosphere and presence. Keep workin on it bro.
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04-11-2007 09:35 |
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Shinyuri
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easy now, yeh drums hav got nice bits of variation on it, like the rolls uve done with em, personally i would give the drums some major hits (snare and bass drum) layered over the main sample.
with the bass - try putting an envelope filter on it and keep on adjusting the frequency - you can make fairly boring riffs spicey by doing that - I do it all the time 
otherwise the tracks quite good - u got the cool atmos samples going on and it sounds real old skool cool. get it finished!
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04-11-2007 12:45 |
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Lightningflash
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love that D patten and the swerly synth
perhaps do somthin with d snare now and then, Id try time streaching it and revers reverb gate.
not to much goin on here but its good cos one can enjoy the drums.
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04-11-2007 23:45 |
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collective
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cheers folks on advice and constructive crits
not bad really as it was only an hours work
the drums are thin cus i dont layer them till the end of doing the whole track
the drum doesnt roll at around 40 secs as i made it that way
have been working on the bline now but still needs to have a little work on it
so thanxs guys working on this one now hard core this week
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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05-11-2007 21:42 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ Bud
First time I been on the site for about 4 days so you're the first of a review frenzy!
Really nice ambience to the drums, nice vibe generally with the pads etc.
Break stutters a bit too much IMO in places.
Yeah the bass needs changing. Think the b line itself may be alright if you change the choice of noise?
Promising man
Look forward to the finished one.
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