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DJ BZ 
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Registration Date: 07-11-2003
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Please check out my new track 'SYSTEMS (GRIMEY REMIX) UNFINISHED' in the listen page and post your comments here!!!
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29-12-2003 22:50 |
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Muad'Dib
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Nice tune dude, nice passbys between diff parts.. ;-) Nice tune, 9/10
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30-12-2003 18:28 |
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djdred
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Registration Date: 01-01-2004
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thats some good shit!!
just smoked a bong and listen to your tuna!! great work...keep em comin
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06-01-2004 00:14 |
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DJ BZ
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cheers
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06-01-2004 00:27 |
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Muad'Dib
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Little dull begining... but wait... *relistening*...
Ok, nice begining, but it is taking too damn long. The part when the drums begin is absolutely excelent!
That voice ("reactor online"; "sensors online" n all that stuff) is little boring... but whatever, it suits good.
The bass sound (rave, at 2:00) is causing little interpollation and clipping... you might want to decrease it a level. Ok, not a level, but for some 5-7%... your choice.
That sound in the background, something like a rave, but very very low... ouiii ouiiii ouiii.. something like that (read it on german) is little boring.. you might want to set the pitch lower-higher while it lasts, or make something similar so that should not be so borring. :-)
The begining at 4:12 is excellent.. I was wondering, if you could teach me how you make there excellent rhytms? I mean, they comply with the hats, with the cymbals, and all that stuff... I try, but have little success...
Could you at least describe me how the kicks, snares and hats go? I'd be very contended! :-)
I hope this was enough for you! :-)
BTW Post some comment on "Cyber Army" pls! :-)
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06-01-2004 19:19 |
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wulf
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Registration Date: 22-12-2003
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the instrumental part is far more than great
but i think the voice is used too much
you should use it just for the intro,
and then after a while just before the beatdrop or something
really nice going !
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06-01-2004 22:37 |
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DJ BZ
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THANK FOR THE COMMENTS REMEMBER THAT TUNE IS ONLY HALF DONE I WANTED TO PUT IT UP HERE SO I COULD GET SOME FEEDBACK SO THAT I CAN CHANGE THE TUNE AROUND A BIT IF THERE'S SOMETHIN PEOPLE DONT LIKE ABOUT IT
MUCH APPRECIATED
BZ
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09-01-2004 02:29 |
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Surya
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Nice drums, and I like the old skool hoover., but boost the sub a bit more there.
Vocal is defenatly overused.
Some other elements besides the vocal, breaks hoover and background noise would be nice though...
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20-01-2004 11:34 |
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