 djphrenzy - Oh! Rock and Roll |
djphrenzy
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Registration Date: 10-09-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Oh! Rock and Roll' and post your comments here!!!
Ok, so lately I've been focusing on electro over dnb. This track is not dnb. I wouldn't post it here except I get the most beneficial reviews/critiques here over other site. I hope its not a big problem. ;]
Anyway, I put this track together today...with a massive hangover. hahaha
This track has been deleted because only dnb tracks are allowed
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-phrenzy-
1. Two Sawtooth Waves
2. Detune first wave +9%
3. Detune second wave -9%
4. ???
5. Profit!
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22-10-2007 00:30 |
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MaJoR 
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Registration Date: 16-10-2007
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Yeah, it's OK. Some parts of the guitar through the flanger remind me of early Gary Numan! lol
I think it's a bit too long though, overall quite nice.
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22-10-2007 21:05 |
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Uberchile
www.myspace.com/uberchile
Registration Date: 14-05-2007
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i dunno wether posting this here was a good idea
the reason we get good reviews here is that people are good at writing them for 'DnB'.
nice build up and as a layout it works musically.
im not really an electro listener i would prefer house n techno stuff more if i was going to stray from DnB.
as a track it gets boring after a couple of minites, and the guitar dosnt seem to match the rest of the track
the drums sound over compressed, especially at 1:40, this makes them drown some of the other stuff and gives me a headache. imo
i can't really review this properly but i had a go.
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www.myspace.com/uberchile
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22-10-2007 23:20 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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It's nice you appreciate the feedback you get on here, but we try to keep things drumnbass, like the logo and the url suggests. Like Uberchile stated people on here give good feedback because they know what a good DrumnBass track needs to stand out.
So please don't post any other tracks in a style so far away from DrumnBass.
The track itself is not bad at all, but it's ... just not DnB, so I have no clue if you made something awfully hot or a plain rip off from some well known track.
I'm sure there are some communities for Electro-style tracks out there, just google a bit.
You don't go to the Butchers' to buy new shoes do you? 
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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23-10-2007 23:08 |
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djphrenzy
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Registration Date: 10-09-2007
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| Originally posted by BattleDroneYou don't go to the Butchers' to buy new shoes do you?
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I would if he had a nice pair to sell. 
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-phrenzy-
1. Two Sawtooth Waves
2. Detune first wave +9%
3. Detune second wave -9%
4. ???
5. Profit!
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24-10-2007 19:49 |
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