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GeeZZ
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Registration Date: 31-03-2007
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Please check out my new track 'beginings' and post your comments here!!!
its about big basslines and drums that punch u in the gut when i do a tack like this i try n keep it simple a lot o my fav tracks are in this style an tats what am tryin 2 do here
am lookin for feedback on a few things but wont ay what right now
i faded the end cos the file was too big
nuff love reveiw crew
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21-10-2007 16:11 |
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Invent 
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ok you got a nice intro beat coming in.. but i feel the sound in the background is too high pitched for my taste.. the snare could however use a bit more. i like the punchy snares that stand out... i like that lfo bass kinda sound that pops in once in a while.. and then the bass that builds uip your track at about 1 min.. is pretty cool... with a nice sample.. props... ohhh and then the kick in of the beat is kinda sudden would propose an addition of a trick here and there... too sudden!... i like some of the mash ups you place inbetween your track... i like your add of percussion making the track nice and rolly... keep on... pretty cool track...and i gotta say the snare feels better in place now... peace:>
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21-10-2007 17:21 |
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Wood.
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I would try to make the flanging high pitched noise (dont know how to call it) change at some points in the song (tune the volume down? pitch down? I dont know), because now I find it annoying at some points (but well put in other points of the song).
I'd tune the basslines up a bit too. nice atmospherics
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21-10-2007 18:41 |
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Tomos
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Wow, big loud sound! What did you use to produce this one?
Snare has too much stereo, imo - it loses some of it's punchiness. Stick it in the middle. Cool basslines. Fat sound. The basslines occassionally drown out the beats tho, you might want to lower the levels a tad.
I don't like the way you half the tempo of the beats. Breaks up the flow, imo. You'd be better off just losing the beats on those parts I reckon.
Overall, a nice tune with good production quality.
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21-10-2007 20:57 |
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BattleDrone
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Make kick and snare mono. Some of those orchestral stabs sound way too classic. There's stereo on just about everything, that's a bit too much. The structure is a bit weird at times too. This could be an ok track if you remix it though
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21-10-2007 23:17 |
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Shinyuri
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oooh, cool start - love the drums on this - agree with the main hits being more centered tho. there are a few samples at the start which sound a little loud for me - turn em down and maybe get a little delay on them.
bass drop - boh! the drop could do with a fast drum roll but love the bass bruv, efective and bassy - liking it. maybe add another layer to the first main bass tho and like wot wicken said - cut that flanging sound when u drop.
like the bass change ups too - the bass u got is sounding phat and wide.
not really into that kinda scratching sound u got coming in on the later basses but thats a matter of taste i reckon. anyways overall a fairly good track imo.
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23-10-2007 09:20 |
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Timmi
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The build ups in this tune are really good in the intro an the break about 2/3rds way in. the snare drum 2 me sounds a bit 2 loud tho, i really like the sounds of the bass melody, but maybe it could have a bit more variation? but 2 b fair alot of dnb is quite minimal, at it might work better on a dancefloor than on my speakers in my room! I like how theres few bars 1/2 speed be4 the drop comes again.
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04-11-2007 23:21 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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nice drums, i like the style of this track, the squelchy bass etc, a nice track to dj too, i personally would like to see more drum edits throughout the tune, its good tho
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21-11-2007 02:02 |
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