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muphasta 
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21-10-2007 15:57 |
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Invent
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The beat doesnt sound very full and the start is okay.. the lfo-ing of the synths is kinda overdone... i would suggest a bit more subtle.. but thats maybe my taste.. then it goes into an intesting build with all that lfo action.. but i gotta say its too calm for my likes... your kick doesnt sound like it has too much definition and your snare also so the movement of track is kinda general.. you got a little nice sounding synth melody later at 2 minutes which is nice.. then a bit more harder drums that still sound to hollow.. i would suggest more layer of snare and maybe some eqing and a different kick.. the bass is also interesting shit, however i feel that as a whole the build up to this part of the song is not worthy with the intro and all.. it doesnt hang together wel musically in my opinion.. but you got some cool distorted synth that comes in later which is pretty nice and your buildup is becoming a bit more but still it just doesnt get there.. i would suggest some processing here and there... overal interesting track.. i woudl work on it a bit longer tho... hope the review was helpfull.. peace
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21-10-2007 17:16 |
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Wood.
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Registration Date: 29-07-2007
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the thing that I'd remember of this song is that it's got alot of melodies, vibes, instruments, in one song (for example the first 22 seconds, then the rest doesn't match imo). I'd try to cut some instruments, or blend them all together, get em in one line to get 1 vibe to represent the track. I can't say anything else coz I'm on some fucked up speakers right now =D
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21-10-2007 18:45 |
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muphasta
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22-10-2007 17:51 |
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MaJoR
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Very quiet!
Nice intricate sounds and good changes just as the ear gets used to it :-)
@ 3:00 it's still going good and I'm not bored with it yet!
Kind of ambient DnB!?
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22-10-2007 21:20 |
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Shinyuri
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cool intro - like the atmos of it. drums have some nice edits too. track could benefit from a few spacey crashes here and there - mind u im a bit of a crash whore.
i like the tension building in this track - soft hard soft harder etc.
do agree with the others that there are several tunes worth of ideas in here, mind u i reckon it works well with what u done with it. how about a few people samples in there too tho?
nice track overall man
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23-10-2007 09:10 |
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BattleDrone
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Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Buildup is a bit strange to me.
The piano-padz are sweet.
You put a lot work into this, good sounds.
The Bassstabs from 2:10 lack power.
Those high marimba's should not be played so long, they start to irritate.
The melody from 2:53 till 3:15 is sweet.
The track seems to be build out some different parts that are played in a sequence, but there is too little interaction between those parts for my taste.
With some rearranging this is a killer track.
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