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collective
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Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'war wound' and post your comments here!!!
ok this a snippet of a tune im working on with a freind of mine mr illmotive its a joint track 50 50 split all the way i did drums and bline he did the sounds and twisting.
we took this back to the old days of ed rush opticl feelsoz for the shortness of the track and quality we still got to finish it an mix it down so here is this for you lot
__ did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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20-10-2007 13:48 |
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stiffer
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Registration Date: 06-10-2007
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cool vibe on this track man
like the old skool feel to it
atmo's are cool.
maybe there could be a new layer to the beat when it drops.
subby bline is good.
quite like this one its a bit different to the norm
good work
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20-10-2007 14:26 |
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collective
TeamSleaze.com

Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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yeah like i said this aint been finished at all
the preview i gave you is really ruff cut but ta anyway man
__ did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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20-10-2007 14:37 |
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stickbubbly
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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nice track!
some nice fat sounds. good melody.
i think it could use a bit more atmosphere, or build ups. and maybe a few vocals or more movie sample's.
but overall, really cool song.
nice one.
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20-10-2007 18:30 |
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philbee
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Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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like it alot
nice live soundin drums
really good build up ,nice edits
love that minimal bass stab then the 2/2 hit nice
would deff play this
nice preview
wanna hear the full!!
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20-10-2007 18:35 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Beautiful!!! Yep, Ed Rush and Optical all over this. Definitely an old skooly vibe here, absolutely love it. The only thing I'd change is the beats - they need to be a little more upfront, they're ever so slightly too far back in the mix.
Apart from that, this an excellent piece of work. Nice to hear this kinda vibe still going!! Bring it back I say!!
Super bass stabs, btw!
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21-10-2007 10:21 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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those drums are bad as fuck!
rolls along on the intro nicely!!
the big 'cough' reece wob bass needs turning down a bit.
but yeah, upload that full version and i'll leave some kind words for ya there too!
__ "When you lose, dont lose the lesson"
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28-10-2007 12:40 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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nice break to start with with spooky fx, nice, deffienitely my cup of tea. nice filter bass stabs and quality sub bass, beats are well in time and fit together well. the kick drum needs a bit more boom. the bass is twisted and darkside. one for the 3 a.m ravers. like the spooky intro, a nice rolling tune. probably a nice tune to mix in on the decks. only a small clip but i like what i hear. with a bit more work i would say 9/10 ,a good track with some nice ideas and plenty of potential, one to look out for The song has a nice flow to it and although it doesn´t have so much variation in the drumline as most dark tunes the flow keeps me going.
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17-11-2007 12:23 |
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KreyZ
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Registration Date: 29-12-2005
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good stuff yo
maybe pay some more attention to the drop
keep it up
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21-11-2007 01:38 |
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illmotive
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Registration Date: 19-10-2007
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24-11-2007 16:00 |
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