drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » muaddib - Cyber Army muaddib - Cyber Army Author Post Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Cyber Army' in the listen page and post your comments here!!! __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 28-12-2003 18:43 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  Come on guys, at least one comment? One little comentishe? ;-)) __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 30-12-2003 21:26 thechronic admin Registration Date: 01-11-2002 Posts: 5,293 Helpfulness rating:  Experimental and veeery fast!! Very peculiar track, after a while some euro trance / rave influences come in, but because they're triggered so fast it sounds very weird. The buildup is a little strange too, you've got many elements and different breaks and sounds but they just seem to be put right after another without putting much thought to it. Try to work on the structure!! It really sounds like you've smashed it together in a couple of hours. A good track takes days and days of work I would also suggest to slow it down, but this is clearly something you've intended so go ahead __ If you find spam on the site, please hit the button and select my name. I'll personally kick it to the murky depths of hell where it belongs! 03-01-2004 02:44 Airfull Sexy Lady Registration Date: 09-11-2002 Posts: 2,455 Helpfulness rating:  like p said, a lot of things init, not bad, but //wait//*relistening* ok suddenly there's that 'high sound'..I think you should use that for a climax, let that sound become bigger/higher and then one fat fat drop, that would be very 'cool' damn to many differrent sounds to give comment to 'em all!!! maybe you have to leave some things away, or make the song longer just to give all the sounds their time to breath!!! you know what I mean.... (especially int the beginning) P is this enough??? __ ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD! 03-01-2004 11:44 thechronic admin Registration Date: 01-11-2002 Posts: 5,293 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Airfull P is this enough??? ) __ If you find spam on the site, please hit the button and select my name. I'll personally kick it to the murky depths of hell where it belongs! 03-01-2004 12:22 djdred Producer Registration Date: 01-01-2004 Posts: 47 muaddib u r cool.. Preety good needs some clartity I got a bit confused. But thats cause im a stupid Australian. Keep rockin that rail gun!! 06-01-2004 00:22 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  Ok, now, let me say what I have to :-) First, thanx for the comments! thechronic - Experimental and veeery fast!! -> this was my whole point, and I will NOT decrease the speed, sorry -Very peculiar track,- -> what in the hell is "peculiar"? I searched in the vocabulary, and it founds nothing logical that I can rely on. Can someone please explain me the meaning of this word in this context? :-) thnx -after a while some euro trance / rave influences come in- -> EXCATLY! ;-) - but because they're triggered so fast it sounds very weird.- -> hmm, I don't get how is that "weird". The song is fine in my ears! ;-))) -The buildup is a little strange too, you've got many elements and different breaks and sounds but they just seem to be put right after another without putting much thought to it.- -> actualy, the build-up is made of so many diff sounds, that I don't know how I managed to puzzle them off to be heard as something! ;-))) But at least they sound... well, ok :-) -The buildup is a little strange too, you've got many elements and different breaks and sounds but they just seem to be put right after another without putting much thought to it.- ->with this I agree, and I will improve the structure :-) -I would also suggest to slow it down, but this is clearly something you've intended so go ahead - -> Uhm... nope, sorry :-) The main point is that I tried to make DnB at the speed of DarkStep (a part of Jungle, AK1200 makes it)... and I made it! Finaly! Maybe the sounds cannot be heard too clearly on this speed... I can hear them, but whatever - the main point was to beat the DarkStep in the speed. BTW, thanx for the response! Airfull - ok suddenly there's that 'high sound'..- -> Where is that high-sound? Can you please reference me to the time? And, how do you suggest to make that "dzvrcky" in the build-up? :-) -damn to many differrent sounds to give comment to 'em all!!! - -> complex and fast, the exact point... It seems that the sounds do not mix themselves much... so they fit ok, I think... I might pull out parts that make clipping. -maybe you have to leave some things away, or make the song longer just to give all the sounds their time to breath!!! - -> I shall try... to make it longer :-) -P is this enough??? - -> Damn it, it is not! :-)))) Thanx for the response, u 2! ;-) djdred - muaddib u r cool..- -> thnx! :-) -Preety good needs some clartity I got a bit confused.- -> Now I'm confused.. what is a clartity? Or clarity, whatever? :-) -thats cause im a stupid Australian.- -> u'r not! Relax n enjoy! ;-) -Keep rockin that rail gun!!- -> QUAKE 3 RULEZ! :-) I hate UT! 10x 4 d rezponze ! :-) And to everyone, thank you! PS You might wonder what happened that I'm so happy and satisfied? Well, hehe... I have a girlfriend! I never had one before!! :-) Cya! __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 06-01-2004 19:09 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  noone else? __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 08-01-2004 15:43 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Yeah, me, a few more days until my last examination, and gonna revieuw every track than! __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 08-01-2004 15:44 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Did a looot of reviews, so took me a bit longer to get to thisone First, let me say your track is distorted due to too loud recording. Lots of different sounds and melodies, but structurewise they just seem to have one function: not make the track boring. It does that, but the sounds and melodies don't have a real function, like tell a story or sumthin, they sound like you just threw them together... __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 20-01-2004 14:00 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  10x very much, my friend! I juz don't get how to make decent tune... __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 21-01-2004 01:36 thechronic admin Registration Date: 01-11-2002 Posts: 5,293 Helpfulness rating:  I removed this track on Muaddib's request. Expect some new stuff from him soon! __ If you find spam on the site, please hit the button and select my name. I'll personally kick it to the murky depths of hell where it belongs! 07-04-2004 21:09 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » muaddib - Cyber Army