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MaJoR MaJoR is a male
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Hi all

I'm working on THIS is at the moment, my first proper DnB track (giving Trance and 80's Synth a rest).

I would be grateful for any comments, am I on the right track?

Cheers

Mark

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by MaJoR: 22-10-2007 21:08.
16-10-2007 13:40 Homepage of MaJoR
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Not bad for a first track... vocal is too loud, there's no bassline.
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16-10-2007 15:07 Homepage of BattleDrone
MaJoR MaJoR is a male
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Thanks for comments so far :-)

I've worked on it some more and would welcome further comments.

Now named Do You Ever Do You Ever
22-10-2007 20:58 Homepage of MaJoR
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Yo MaJor

This is a really clean track, productions good and well mixed.
For me though it's too clean, comes across as a bit ambient and even when the beat picks up, doesn't really get goin.

I'm guessing that the majority of the beats are programmed from scratch? They're well done but lack that "sheen" that a filtered sampled breaks give you when you chuck em in with programmed hits.

Pads are great and along with the vocal, they do bring about that goldie-esque feel. The track is just a bit too sterile to carry the tune any further along those lines.

Also, where is the bass???? Confused

Overall, loads of production skills on show here, look forward to hearing more from you, join the forum, review other folks tunes, get producer rights n post your tunes on here!

Nice one

BH

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23-10-2007 08:51 Homepage of Binary Havoc
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