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stiffer
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Please check out my new track 'Summers dream' and post your comments here!!!

I wrote this around june this year as part of my final major project whilst doing my BTEC music technology.
its a nice roller of a tune
hope u like it
15-10-2007 16:17
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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yo stiffer.


peeps on here are just as eager as you are for feedback/reviews/comments.

just before you upload a track, i find its nice to review the most recent 5 or so tunes.

also, its better to check the date of posting of the tunes before you review
because comments will have no bearing on a tune made a year or more ago.
keep it to the recent ones as they are in most need of feedback.
sorry to sound obvious if you already know it all.

will check this later mate.

big ups west yorkshire producers!

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15-10-2007 16:27
stiffer
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yeah mate
i do try to review as much as possible, but i was on my laptop today on the train so didnt really have a good set of speakers or headphones so wouldnt be able to give a good review.
i will be making the effort later on to give some reviews so.....
anyways cheers 7g
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15-10-2007 19:28
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Yeah, pretty cool but a bit bass-heavy. Also, the beats need some work to give them more presence and meatyness. They're really thin sounding. Also, the mix as a whole has a general muffled sound to it.

The melodies are pretty good but nothing to write home about. The synth work is probably the best thing about this track - especially the opening synths which are just fantastic. Really chilled and atmospheric. You could almost turn this tune into an Orb-like track if you took away the beats.

Keep on working on your sound quality mate. You got great skills with your synth work.

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15-10-2007 20:59 Homepage of Tomos
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Great intro stiffer, lovin tha pads n the melodies. Nice bass when it arrives. Beat is subtle when it arrives but works well.

Am now waiting for this to kick off n get my head nodding........Oh it doesnt really do what I thought it would.

What can I say? I really, really like all the elements of this tune, nothing about it is wrong, I Just think that it needs to explode a bit more. It drops a bit deeper around 4 mins but it all feels like a bit of a let down.

Personal preference probably cos as I said the instrumentations all good.

Nice tune anyway

Respect

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15-10-2007 21:05 Homepage of Binary Havoc
stiffer
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cheers for all your comments
anybody else like to review this track Tongue
16-10-2007 15:49
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nice pads.


bass is a bit too heavy, just a bit mind.

beats could be brought further forward in the mix.

nice tack tho. Happy

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