 stiffer - Enter the darkness |
stiffer
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Registration Date: 06-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Enter the darkness' and post your comments here!!!
This is the newest track ive been working on
not finished yet but would like some opinions
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12-10-2007 12:56 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
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Instruments sound too much as standard presets. Melodies are well done, but there should be more variation throughout the track, it's to much of the same.The end call for a heavy drop.
sound quality is A OK.
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12-10-2007 13:04 |
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Tomos
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Really, really well constructed this one. Definitely my kinda vibes on this one!!! The melodies are superb throughout.
The only thing that lets this tune down is the sound, especially the beats which sound really thin. I'm not sure what software you're using but you really need to beef up those beats and make them sound really fat and rollin.
The track loses its way a bit towards the end - sounds like you ran out of ideas? It doesn't really go anywhere, but it's still pretty good.
Btw, that sub bass is too loud, imo. You need to tone that down a little. It sounds too big compared to the beats.
Nice track!! 
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14-10-2007 10:23 |
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stiffer
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Registration Date: 06-10-2007
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cheers for the reviews guys.
this is only about the 4th dnb tune ive finished. i used to just produce downtempo but decided i was gonna go all out and put dnb to the test.
btw, the sub bass only cutsthrough so loud after i converted the file to mp3, maybe it was a bad compression site or something.
is there a good online converter anyone knows.
MORE REVIEWS PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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14-10-2007 12:03 |
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Seven Gun
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Originally posted by stiffer
btw, the sub bass only cutsthrough so loud after i converted the file to mp3, maybe it was a bad compression site or something.
is there a good online converter anyone knows.
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thats why i always mix or master my tunes more than once.
check the mp3 then remaster the bits that are not satisfactory. 
also i find its better to convert at a higher kbps rate.
it can be a bitch waiting to upload bigger files but its worth it.
yeah, the sub needs a touch taking out.
also the break used sounds a bit too familiar and could do with more
one shot layers to disguise it. snare sounds a touch thin too. maybe
add a beefier snare with low mids on.
i'm not been nasty critical, just saying what i think would improve the tune.
that said, the tune is of a high standard indeed. i like it a lot.
the filtered break parts sound mint and clean and the overall
composition of the track is very good.
peace, 7G.
P.S... i read on the leedsdrumnbass forum that you are from leeds.
is that correct?
i am from leeds, in the hyde park area.
hit me up on AIM or myspace.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Seven Gun: 15-10-2007 00:29.
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15-10-2007 00:19 |
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collective
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sub is heavy very deep needs to be calmed down a bit
the drums do sound thin need a bit of beefing up but nice man
i like your tune anyway
keep it up
what software you use?
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15-10-2007 20:16 |
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stiffer
Producer
Registration Date: 06-10-2007
Posts: 60
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230 views and only 5 reviews
anybody else like to review it
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23-10-2007 14:12 |
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