 CULTURE BOY - dont make me laugh! |
CULTURE BOY 
v v v iv a record missing
Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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Please check out my new track 'dont make me laugh!' and post your comments here!!!
yo yo!!! long time sice i posted a track! tune in the process of been signed hence the shortness! fruity 3xosc n shizzle as usual. big up! feeds n shizzle taken, could be changed if the feeds are helpfull! big up
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12-10-2007 01:01 |
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On this page you can find drum-n-bass tracks that have been made by drumnbass.be members. Please give some comments after listening to a track.
On this page you can find drum-n-bass tracks that have been made by drumnbass.be members. Please give some comments after listening to a track.
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12-10-2007 08:21 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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12-10-2007 08:39 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The wobble part needs more variation (little synth stabs, pad stabs, FX stabs, ...) to keep it interesting. The element (organ-style) that enters at 22" sounds off (not the instrument, but the melody) compared to the pad underneath.
The whole laughing thing is ok, but don't repeat it too much because it gets anoying.
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12-10-2007 13:07 |
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theaudiodemon
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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Easy now! Good vibes on this track...
Tips: Take the low freq bass out like 7G said and re-do the bass, if you got the bass in with the synth EQ it and take the low end out of the synth and just put the bass note patterns back in.
2. Finish the track ands send it over, good vibes on this one, sure it'd tare up a dancefloor 
Good work!
audio demon 
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13-10-2007 12:32 |
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collective
TeamSleaze.com
Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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not really into this style
but yeah has a good quality to it drums sound crisp and clear like the wind sound
bass dont sound that bad nice low end specially round 2.14 as im running it on makies they are picking it up nice so id leave that bit imo. the rest cud mabye do with a boost but thats up to you as there aint no mid range in it
the laugh does get a bit annoying but in a club you aint going to notice it are you
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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13-10-2007 14:01 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Excellent! Wow, this is super fat! I didn't find the laugh sample as annoying as some other peeps... well, may a little bit towards the end. 
Sound wise, this tune is spot-on really. Not really much I can say. The only thing I don't like is that casio-like synth line from 0.22 to 1.05. It really doesn't fit the track, imo. The wrong vibe and it sounds outta tune a bit. But I suppose it's too late to start changing things with the track, since it's getting signed?
Apart from that, top tune! I'd love to here the full versio. Let us know when it's out eh? 
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14-10-2007 10:13 |
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Seven Gun
dotbee 4eva
Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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getting signed???
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"When you lose, dont lose the lesson"
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14-10-2007 17:18 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Originally posted by Seven Gun
getting signed???
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Was that question meant for me? If so, it says in his comments at the top, "long time sice i posted a track! tune in the process of been signed hence the shortness!"
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"It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan
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14-10-2007 18:18 |
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Shinyuri
myspace.com/shinyuribeats
Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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Easy now CB!
rudeness, fukin love this track!
agree with the tomos about the synth tho.
can i get a copy?
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21-10-2007 08:16 |
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CULTURE BOY
v v v iv a record missing
Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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22-10-2007 20:38 |
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stiffer
Producer
Registration Date: 06-10-2007
Posts: 60
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beats sound crisp and phat.
maybe i have to agree the vocal are a little overused but thats a minor little thing.
wobble wobble dancefloor grittiness.
i like the track but i feel it needs a little more variation.
Jump ups not really my thing but i'm diggin what your doing.
big ups to the west yorkshire massive
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23-10-2007 14:52 |
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