 D Juice - Brainworm |
D Juice 
Producer
Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Brainworm' and post your comments here!!!
Hi guys,
here's the fixed brainworm!
thanks for all the comments on my track, have been very helpful for finishin this piece!
couple of things i've changed conform your comments:
-Bass volume turned up
-Bass added to bassline
-Contrast between breakdown and drop slightly reduced. want to keep it this way cos i like it. hopefully you do too
-More variation added
-Click removed at 3.45, thanks halph prince!
-Breaks and hardcore kick had lot too much contrast and a too sick snare, i've fixed that too.
Well, this is the finished track so hope you guys enjoy, remember you can always get it on 320/wav (Luukbos89@gmail.com)
Thanks again,
D Juice
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11-10-2007 13:11 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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the intro is top notch...I like how the string layers work well together. Dont like the HC kicks after the intro, it kinda ruins the good feeling from the beggining. The structure is not well organised to be hones, its like 3 tracks put together. You could easily make new songs from those part. Ok now the park that I like. Damn nice kick and snare samples. Nice and punchy good work. Too much upfront i think. I would turn the snare a bit down. The bass is sweet, nice sound for shure but its too in the background because of the overpowering break. I like only some parts of this track. But thats just my taste...all in all nice track, very nice
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11-10-2007 13:54 |
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collective
TeamSleaze.com
Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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fucking sweet track mate really like this alot
tell your from holland my man
breaks are nice love the kick snare you got going and the shuffle on top is nice love the vocals in it and the gabba kicks are sweet makes it dirtier
love gabba so this gets a big " thumbs up imo
gonna have to grab the wav file off you man
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11-10-2007 14:47 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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I love this. The build-up is brilliant. The switch over is pretty cool (but still needs a little work to make it gel more) and the heavy stuff is really good too. That "You're not my boy" sample is pretty annoying tho... I'd drop it. Love those breaks! And especially the kick drum madness!!
Bassline is proper sick but needs more bass in it - sounding slightly on the thin side at the mo.
The tracks ends really, really weirdly! You start some new beats right at the end which sounds like the beginning of a new track - just like in a mix. I was actually looking forward to a new part of the track at that stage... but it ended. 
Oh well, still love this tune tho!! 
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11-10-2007 21:29 |
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Lightningflash
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great intro
Id like to hear more of that with drums
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