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collective 
TeamSleaze.com
Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'soul breeze' and post your comments here!!!
ok
right i finished this so this is my first ever complete track in DnB ive done!!!
hope you like it
may need a few tweaks with it specially the ending, o an if you listen to it at least review as i only give reviews to those that review mine even though i onlybeen going a year, so any ones help is help
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08-10-2007 20:08 |
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stiffer
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Registration Date: 06-10-2007
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Nice crisp drums on the intro although I feel the intro could have some harmonic content to build up to the breakdown.
really sweet harmonies and drop is nice
i really like your edits at around the 3 min mark
and that melody line is top notch
The bass doesnt cut through enough for me but that might be these speakers
overall a decent tune
well done
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09-10-2007 11:47 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The drums are too upfront, pushing the melodic content to the back. I don't hear a lot of bass action either. But this track has a nice flow and I'm looking forward to your next one.
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09-10-2007 16:16 |
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D Juice
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Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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i do think your attitude is pretty bad, still though i think i should be helpfull and revieuw it, here we go:
Drums in the beginning are pretty tight, just sound a little bit like you sampled them from another track, maybe little less decay on the kick and snare! [ghostsnares are really tight though!]
introdrums could use lot more variation or an atmospheric sound underneat. probably a low cut which you slowly release during the intro will be cool, like you did in 2nd breakdown.
Breakdown: melody starts in REALLY nice, gives me an optimistic feeling. but then the subs come in and it really screws it all up, doesnt fit the melody at all man! work on that!
Overall very nice ideas in the track, some things just not worked out that well.
good luck on this one, would love to hear it fixed!
Ez
D Juice
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11-10-2007 13:25 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Firstly, you gotta stop that attitude "I only do reviews for people who review my stuff". If you want a good response to your tunes on here you gotta go out of your way a bit and review as many tunes as you can. You make friends that way. I've only been going since about April this year and I've reviewed nearly every track since I joined.
Anyways, enough lecturing. About your tune - yeah, nice cool vibes. The beats are overpowering at the mo and a little repetitive, but still good. Lovely melodies throughout, although they do clash on a number of occassions - especially near the 2 min mark.
The track is a tad long I reckon - I made the same mistake on my first track here. You could easily take 1 min or 2 off.
Cool beats edits around 3.05. They don't really go anywhere tho because you carry on with the same beat afterwards. You should bring some slight variation into the beats.
Also, you really need a bassline in there to hold the track together. You can really notice the lack of bassyness in there.
But overall, a nice cool track! Keep it up.
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11-10-2007 20:32 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Big cheers Collective diggin the beat's, dam good tune, good mixdown, everything sounds level, though drum's have to much high end on my end, diggin the timely lfo chord progression, the wobles are a treat to listen to, forshure diggin the Jazzy bit's, sounds way to bizy though, drum's are to fearce with that high end for when you got everthing goin, heafty good filter jobby's all over this, speaker to speaker bits are a treat. Well layed out track, enjoyed it, and again sorry for my nasty respone, hope alls good, cheers.
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 13-10-2007 15:39.
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