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Dodgsta
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Hi
This is my 3rd attempt at tune.Its not finished yet.Please could i get some constructive comments please.
Thanks... http://boomp3.com/m/f03c149b3331

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08-10-2007 14:28
Dodgsta
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Anybody??

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08-10-2007 18:39
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try leaving comments on other peoples work....
it might help.

also its better for you if you upload the tunes directly to this site.
get producer rights. Happy

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08-10-2007 18:41
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Should be faster, but not bad.

Why don't you rate some tunes from others on here and apply for producer rights so you can get full feedback on the tracks you post???

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why should it be faster??? ^^^

sounds like old skool jungle tbh. and in that respect needs more edits of the beats. its a bit repetitive. and that bass lines a bit droning after a while.Theres some horrible crackly distortion in places, i dont know if thats meant to be there or if its because of where your streaming it from Confused . Not bad for your 3rd tune though
08-10-2007 19:07
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^^^because this site is not called jungle.be Big Grin

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^^^because this site is not called jungle.be Big Grin


ROFL haha dude yoiur opening a hole can of worms there.

"Only drum and bass tracks are allowed. Related styles such as jungle, techstep, darkstep etc are ofcourse allowed, but this is a dnb only site and tracks that don't belong here will be promptly removed."

and even thats not strictly accurate
08-10-2007 19:31
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Hey dude,
First of all that track isn't even on here, I'm not saying it is not allowed.
The thread title does not say "3rd attempt at Jungle. Opinions and comments please". Or did I miss something? So if it has to be DnB it has to be faster IMO.

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08-10-2007 19:44 Homepage of BattleDrone
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even if you sped the tune up it would still be a jungle tune. speeding it up to 178 does not make it dnb.

Doesnt matter. pointless argument

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08-10-2007 19:54
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you say tomato.........

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08-10-2007 21:14
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