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Please check out my new track 'Sky High - COLLAB with BattleDrone' and post your comments here!!!
This is a collaboration between BattleDrone and myself. It took just over a week.
The track started out as an unfinished track by Battle. He layed down the main synth melodies, some FX and beats. I then added the main bass, layered the beats and vocals and added few little extra FX. We're both really happy with it.
It was entirely created on FL Studio.
Have a listen and let us know what you think ladies!!
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07-10-2007 23:51 |
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BattleDrone
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Tomos proved to be a real nice guy to work with...
Hope you all like the track.
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08-10-2007 00:35 |
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Seven Gun
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just had a little checkywecky, not a full listen.
need to check out on speakers tomorrow.
sounds pretty good tho.
@listeners.....if every mofo on this site doesnt review this, bow your head in shame!
these two dudes give feedback on all your tunes!
biggupz fellas!
will give detailed bizzle tomorrow.
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08-10-2007 01:38 |
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collective
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nice like this not to sure on the vocals imo
bline is nice and drums are rolling nicely too
the added roll at 157 is sweet after the drop
the vocals sound better here to so my bad for saying i didnt like them eralier
imo the bline could do with more low end as it doesnt seem to grumble as much id like it to but it sounds good well better than good
the overall vibe is nice i like it nice little roller
production is good but the vocal seems to overpower if all i dont know whether you wanted it to be like that or not
but yeah man this tune is good you should do some more stuff
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08-10-2007 12:29 |
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wrm
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ok guys, I know i havent reviewed lately that much. School kicked in pretty drasticaly. Anyway, as the biggest reviewers out here u deserve proper review. The track is epic as fuck. Thats Tomos signature for shure.
Lets start with the beggining:
I didnt quite like the cutted sample. But thats my taste. Nice intro btw. Nice pads, everything sits right. Then the beat kicks in...I have a feeling that it has a too much reverb on it( it sounds like that). It kinda sounds like its locked in some room and you can hear only whats comming out. I would reckon to re-EQ it, bring it more forward. Especialy the kick which lacks the 'puff' in it, also the snare sounds a bit flat. I like the hihat over the break. It bring nice flow to the track. Tomos, you did pretty nice work with the bass. Damn nice bass dude. Maybe there is a too much stereo in it. But thats ok! The vocal samples are a bit loud imo, it overpowers in a bit when it kicks in. But the samples are well-picked.
So guys, you made very nice work. I like the track. It has some nice melodies and ideas. Lot of changes thoughout the tune...work a bit on the drum part.
cheers guys
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08-10-2007 15:00 |
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Seven Gun
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the pads are really nice.
good epic sound.
vocal bit too loud.
this could be a classic, its just the beats
sound phased/filtered/compressed/over eq'd to be honest.
hmmm... actually some of the sounds dont really fit together as nice as they should.
the alien girl bass is too loud.
the best thing i could say is that the atmosphere
has real presence and the vocals and pads are cool as fuck.
but...
not feeling it i'm afraid guys. confuses my ears.
sorry to sound harsh n all.
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08-10-2007 17:52 |
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philbee
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yes and no..
like the intro sounds and fx yep vocal is to loud and the beatz sound a lil bit to quiet in the mix..nice bass stabs going on..drop..mmm alil flat seems to forced,,then it sounds like the intro a lil bit again..needs to kinda switch to another level if yah know what i mean
id like to remix this guyz!!
anywayz all in all good ..but not fully there man.
peace nlove
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08-10-2007 21:27 |
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Tomos
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Thanks for all the comments so far guys!!
Me and Drone pretty much agree with the vast majority of what you've said - we've come up with the same ideas ourselves independently of each other. We'd love to impliment those changes, but read on....
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id like to remix this guyz!!
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I'd love you to remix it too, but I'll let you in on a secret here... I managed to completely fuck up the FL file last night!!
The actual version posted on this website isn't 'finished' at all!! It's an early version which I saved a few minutes before I corrupted the FL file. This version was supposed to go to Battle for him to tweak, re-arrange, etc, etc, and come back to me for further tweaks. But when I attempted to delete the unused channels and VSTs it caused FL to crash. By instinct I went straight to the "Save" option... Little did I know that by attempting to save a file when FL crashes it fucks it up permanently!!!
We recognise that the track is far from perfect at the moment but there's little we can do now cos the original file is fucked. I feel like doing this...
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08-10-2007 22:03 |
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BattleDrone
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But since we put quite some work into it we wanted to throw it onto the site anyway. As a kind of goodbye to the track
I'm not feeling all THAT bad about it, but it's a pitty.
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08-10-2007 22:25 |
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Seven Gun
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be thankful we have the future.
tomos, you are becoming the collab slag/whore/slut.
get ready to open your legs once more, i want another collab.
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08-10-2007 22:43 |
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philbee
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Originally posted by Tomos
I'd love you to remix it too, but I'll let you in on a secret here... I managed to completely fuck up the FL file last night!! |
gutted
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08-10-2007 23:29 |
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Seven Gun
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what about giving phil the wav samples, the main ones?
i'm sure he could bust some nasty shit out with them
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09-10-2007 00:28 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ Guys
Heads noddin to this one.
Really cool laid back vibe, i like the shuffle although I think it might be just a smidge quiet at the start of the tune and maybe it could get cut up a bit more later in the tune.
Really like the bass throughout, use of vocal samples is great.
Good mixdown, great stereo image.
Respect both, a cool track.
Nice one
BH
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09-10-2007 09:05 |
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stiffer
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really nice tune
The intro pads set the tune up nicely
the vocal works really well at building up the mood.
like the FX vocal as well.
Drop is BIG, dark gritty bass, just how we like it.
overall quality tune guys
keep up the good work
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09-10-2007 11:41 |
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darkstar
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It isn't often I sware. So I won't. lol
This track is very nice. Being an FL user myself I recognise some of those lovely samples, but that bass is something else
The collaboration is very lush. Drums are good. Unfortunately, I have to agree with others here that the vocals are not only too loud, but they are somewhat of an irritance.
I love stuff done in minor chords so you've won me over with that straight away, I must say though that the layering of the drums is almost like it's been doubled and shifted, was that intentional?
Uh, the pads at the start are nice but the whole nicety thing is shortlived, maybe a little more substance in the introduction (break cutting in and out, filtering, delay, etc.) would make it a more inviting experience.
About 1:58 or so, when that section kicks in, man, I love a track you can nod ur head to
I don't mind the track, it's worthy of the praise it's getting.
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11-10-2007 05:35 |
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