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collective 
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Please check out my new track 'soul breeze' and post your comments here!!!
right after coming home today and well feeling kinda in a good mood thought id start anew track and this what i got,
so have a butchers at it i havent started to do anything special to it yet just thinking bout where to take it from here
so any feedback be nice .be crew
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03-10-2007 22:02 |
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BattleDrone
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Sounds sweet, only the bass sound does not satisfy. It is too thin, could do with more low end, might be a bit off tone (it's not present enough for me to judge) and it is played along side the kickdrum which is not a good idea as it does not build any tension. So you might want to work on the bass a bit :-). Enough butchering, this has huge potential if you can do some liquid melodies on top of it.
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04-10-2007 09:44 |
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collective
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sweet my man cheers for the buthcering, lol really mean it the only way to get better is to have a bit of advice
right now dont laugh but what do you mean liquid melodies as im new to this stuff i dont quite understand it. 
really i should go listen to liquid i suppose
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04-10-2007 11:55 |
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Binary Havoc
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Yo,
Like the intro loads, cool break (needs a bit of variation), really, really nice chords coming in over it. They go on for much too long though and the beat needs to come sooner. Similarly, the melody needs to change after the drop IMO as it carries on in the same vein. Chords come fading in again a bit later and I can't tell you how good I think that short section of the track is, it has real feeling.
This has massive potential IMO and I can't wait to hear the next mix down.
Certainly the best thing I've heard from you Collective.
Biggupz Dude
BH
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04-10-2007 23:22 |
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Binary Havoc
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04-10-2007 23:28 |
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DjReali
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I'like it ,but i think it's a little to quiet
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07-10-2007 09:33 |
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Tomos
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Yeah it's quiet but it still a lovely, lovely tune!! Excellent melody and breaks.
Some of the synths are out of tune with each other tho, especially between 2.02 - 2.12. You really need to sort that out. Alo, I think the bass from 1.29 to 1.50 is also out of tune with the synths.
Apart from that, sounds pretty good to me! Definite potential for a good full length track.
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07-10-2007 10:39 |
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collective
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yeah some of the synths were out true have been in are edited it all just got another aminute to add to the track and should be done
it was quiet yes and the bline was out too so ive gone and sorted it all
the reason for it alll being quiet was i was running my sound card wrong so ive sorted that out to, will post the full lenght track in a day or to just got fill out the sounds morre aswell so hold ya there dudes
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07-10-2007 11:26 |
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Seven Gun
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dutty. i like this.
the beats are particularly good.
could do with a volume boost tho.
nice standard liquid lfo rhodes.
build up needs more work. dont like how the sounds die before the drop. more tension is needed i think.
this could be a big big tune with more work.
the bass could be a bit more grimey (think d-bridgey).
anyways, nice preview. add more elements and you
are on to a winner.
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08-10-2007 17:33 |
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