 Rydonn - <--SUMMON HIM--> |
Rydonn 
<<RYDONN>>
Registration Date: 25-09-2007
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Please check out my new track '<--SUMMON HIM-->' and post your comments here!!!
intro-broken beat dnb-automated bass>>>followed by hard jungle choking automated bass (HEAVY SH!T)
---feedback is difficult to get in south africa as there arent many heads----so crits and props are most welcome.
Peace
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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03-10-2007 15:47 |
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theaudiodemon
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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Easy Rhydonn.
Before the actual drop I was actually wondering where it was going, good use of breaks and techniques here. 2nd drop is dark mate, good stuff... just need to learn to mix your tunes down a bit, your fx and bass needs levelling.
Besides that wicked stuff, keep em coming!
<-- AUDIO DEMON - SAT 8-9 WWW.UKBASSRADIO.CO.UK -->
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03-10-2007 16:04 |
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ThusSpoke
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Registration Date: 02-10-2007
Posts: 7
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Somewhat unusual beat. The part between 2:00 3:00 could use more variation. I dig the overall feel of this track, knowing that this is the kind of track I like to hear, but probably only after 2 hours into the party.
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03-10-2007 18:52 |
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collective
TeamSleaze.com
Registration Date: 28-11-2006
Posts: 235
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dont like the sound you used at the beging bro
would rather you have taken that out just the atmos and the beats would do for me, mabye a bit more atmos at the begining
the broken beats are sweet like them,
after the drop is nice like the chop and change would like to hear a bit more bline in it as you use it sparingly, although the sub is nice and underlying
it gets to samey towards the end imo
it needs to change a little you know add things extra to it
but yeah like the way it feels my man keep it up my man be good to hear more from you
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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03-10-2007 20:54 |
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Rydonn
<<RYDONN>>
Registration Date: 25-09-2007
Posts: 21
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Word Up
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yo word up on reviews dudes!
much appretiated------>I did need an outside opinion on that track and the suggestions you fellaz gave me were wicked-----this was the first time ive been critted and proped by fellow dnb jungle head/producers---thanks for givin it an ear---WORD FRIKIN UP!!----<
alright fellaz im of to listen and rewiew sum of your tracks.....
peace!
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04-10-2007 07:37 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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This is not my style (keep that in mind when reading feedback).
The drums are not rolling very well for me. The percussion does not interact with the rest of the drums. Track is not going anywhere.
Sounds like the track consists of 2 different parts glued together, @1:30 the second one starts and I like the second part much better than the first. In fact it's pretty chill and dark atmosphere. Maybe a bit too much reverb on the snare. The noise element is disturbing, lower it's high end a bit maybe.
When you play several snare hits in a row you might want to play them at different levels so they sound more human and less like a stuttering sample.
Some spooky chants could do really great on this.
My advice: Cut off the first 1:30 and make a new intro out of the elements that are present in the rest of the track.
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04-10-2007 10:07 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah, have to agree with Battle on this one (although I do like this style). It sounds like two different tracks stuck together. They need a smoother transition - or like Battle said, cut out the first part and create a new intro for the second part.
The beats are really different and sound great. I reckon you should play the beats without all the crashes for a few bars tho, just to add a little variation.
I feel the track needs a proper melody or hook in there. It's a bit 'up in the air' at the mo.
Cool track overall! 
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05-10-2007 19:09 |
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organic
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Registration Date: 10-10-2007
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oy baz!! just joined the site,so this is my first review!! also from S.A
j.h.b!!living in ireland.eny back to the review!
feeling the the drumz alot, got a lime wax,counter strike thing going down,dark ass fuck!! maybe a bit of a fillter on the drumz for variation,try find some nice epic stings aswell for the intro. e.g listen to the new teebee calyx album to hear what i meen!!
the main body of the tune is cool,i would try get some more low end into the mix and add a big 808 doom drop bass on the first two kick on every bar just to get that jumping,
sick vocal !!!
please keep in mind that just my opinion,overall its a great tune,
keep em coming!!
3rd degree
p.s-ill get some tunes up so you can hear if my knowledge is worth the critic
boh
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10-10-2007 01:45 |
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12-10-2007 08:22 |
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