drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » wulf - plucked! wulf - plucked! Author Post wulf Producer Registration Date: 22-12-2003 Posts: 27 Please check out my new track 'plucked!' in the listen page and post your comments here!!! 23-12-2003 14:36 Airfull Sexy Lady Registration Date: 09-11-2002 Posts: 2,455 Helpfulness rating:  I don't like it __ ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD! 02-01-2004 21:02 thechronic admin Registration Date: 01-11-2002 Posts: 5,293 Helpfulness rating:  Hehe the poor man has to wait for ages to get a response on his hard laboured tune and then he gets this Can perhaps say what's wrong with it? First of all I think the sound is completely wrong. You got the bass turned way up on your amp I think, there's a complete overemphasis on the high end and there's hardly any bass present. When you mix a track you should always compare it to some other tracks and try to make it sound at least as good. I bet if you would play this track on your system first followed by a dnb vinyl or CD you would be blown away by the bass!! The second thing is that all instruments are so robotically programmed. It seems like you're triggering every sound at nearly every 1/16th. There's no swing, no feel to it, it's more elektro than dnb!! Also some sounds have the same melody, which makes it boring... The thing I like about it is that you use interesting sounds, I like the idea of that harpsichord / plucked string thingy (if it would not sound so thin ) __ If you find spam on the site, please hit the button and select my name. I'll personally kick it to the murky depths of hell where it belongs! 03-01-2004 02:37 Airfull Sexy Lady Registration Date: 09-11-2002 Posts: 2,455 Helpfulness rating:  sorry, I don't know all those names so the only thing I can say is that!! __ ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD! 03-01-2004 11:30 djdred Producer Registration Date: 01-01-2004 Posts: 47 keep trying wulf!!! U will get there buddy. the chronic made a good point compare it to other tracks...It's a long windy road filled with headaches but u can make it alot better. What r u using to write with it sounds like u r using rebirth!!! 06-01-2004 00:27 wulf Producer Registration Date: 22-12-2003 Posts: 27 i know i got the comment a lot it sounded too electro all my previous tracks have kinda same style i'm working on sth new trying to make it het more dnb i work with flp which i think sounds kinda electro but nowi'm working with some effects, really starting to sound nice i would like to work with reason, but its really hard to understand i've discovered a few things but really not enough to produce guess release will be about next sunday anyway thanks for the comments! 06-01-2004 11:14 Type Producer Registration Date: 08-01-2004 Posts: 58 I like the plucked tune too, but it's too bad it's standard for Fruity Loops... On the other hand, I like the chaos which lies in this track, it's something completely diffirent... But it needs lots of work I guess... __ Fight the Big Music Industry - Fight Purism as well!!!!!!!!! http://www.cluelessproject.be Check it out! 12-01-2004 23:32 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Have to agree with the others - sub is missing - hi end too loud - hats too loud - kick needs boost - melody sounds quite robotic indeed - sounds all sound too standard FL or something like that, nothing organic about it. Time and practice are the best remedy, trust me, I know __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 20-01-2004 13:54 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » wulf - plucked!