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Please check out my new track 'FrΩ luv two height.' and post your comments here!!!
been bustin' some modification to this one.. i tried, i repeat i tried to eq stuff abit...
i also build in a new few parts.. it still fx-less...but that's because i concentrated on the rest first..
have a listen, hope u like it...
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30-09-2007 19:27 |
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lead:end
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nothing to remark?? really could use some feedback to finish this motherfucker? anyone?
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02-10-2007 17:09 |
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collective
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give the motherfuckers chance my man 
some of them on hear have jobs you know
well imo id boost your drums and as they tend to sound muddy to me need to be sharper and cleaner,
the blines ok not to bad cant really say much as i dont really like this style
some of your ssounds likke they were made on a major morgan which im not to keen on but then thats me
keep going my man you will crack it soon im sure
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02-10-2007 17:46 |
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Tomos
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Pretty good but some of the melodies are clashing, imo. You should definitely think about simplifying your sound. Try to stick to one idea and one vibe. There's too many elements in there all vying for space and attention. It's a bit 
at the mo.
On the positive side, I like the snare sound a lot. Your hi hat and ride work is good too. So too are most of the fills and beat edits.
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05-10-2007 18:23 |
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thechronic
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lol at first I read 'been busting some medication to this one' 
hehe easy on the Bromazepams
The intro is a bit freaky, the bubbling pad seems to be slower than the filtered drum line, probably a slow attack time on the pad. When the filter changes and the bass comes in it seems to come too early because your attention is more on the pad than on the filtered drums.
The mix is very powerful, even on the edge of distorted (eg the heavy kick + cymbal).
Bass and drums are 
This is a style that I dig a lot 
There are some things that need to be cleaned up:
- the first lead synth line (coming in at 1:22) is often out of key, especially in between 1:40 and 2:04)
- second lead line (appears 2:43) is maybe a bit too loud.
- the parts between 4:08-4:28 and 4:39-4:49 are not so great. Repetitive and again sounding delayed - this second part is repeated at 5:10, but then all of a sudden turns into a very interesting melody at 5:30 
- ending needs work
For the rest it is great, very gritty sound, i love the unexpected changes, chord modulations and the like!
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