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Please check out my new track 'work in progress gstar no star ' and post your comments here!!!
ok done a bit more to this still working on it but did some extra work on it after people had given some advice
still alot to do on this so any more hints and tips on anything will be good
so have a listen let me know
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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28-09-2007 21:08 |
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sencefil
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Registration Date: 29-09-2007
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29-09-2007 10:36 |
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collective
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and in english?
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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29-09-2007 12:25 |
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Tomos
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Excellent! A great improvement on your previous version. Good work. Btw, be careful not to post too many tunes and previews in quick succession. We're all given the guideline of one per week.
Back to your track. Nice little opener. Don't like the first 8 snares, I'd remove them. Nice atomspheric pads - I'd turn them up a little actually.
The change over at around 1.12 is very good. A smooth, flowing transition - I like that. The bass and breaks from about 1.17 onwards are really, really, really good! 
They've got a definite old MetalHeadz vibes, which is what got me into dnb in the first place. The bass is really heavy, you've got Ed Rush-like breaks going on, wtih some evil pads and FX in the background... perfect combnation really if you're an old MetalHeadz fan like me!
Very disappointed the preview ended - that last section is excellent and I'm really excited to hear what you'll come up with. Keep up the good work!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Tomos: 30-09-2007 09:46.
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30-09-2007 09:44 |
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reaaaalllly chill.. not something i would dance to on a party, but like when driving in my car at night, nice build-up and effects.. part before second drop is nice.. altho that cymbal isn't my sweaty...for the rest i can't really cant think of anything else.. nice stuff O.G.
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30-09-2007 19:47 |
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theaudiodemon
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Easy ,
nice pads like them, I do think you can build it up a bit more tho before it drops.
Drops pretty good, be good to hear the full version when its done
Keep at it, biggups
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02-10-2007 16:45 |
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