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Please check out my new track 'gstr no star' and post your comments here!!!
ok done a bit more to it today
its only a bit longer but i dont know where to go from here with this as everything ive tried just doesnt seem right ive added aload more to it than the origanal one i upped
need advice on the drop if you know what i mean
any help would be ace
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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26-09-2007 22:25 |
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the drums sound good, but it gets a bit dull imo..
it's not my style.. too slow, i would pitch that up and add a little variation to the bassline.
also a bit short man.
keep it up
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26-09-2007 22:33 |
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collective
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yeah bline is a bit dull
will vary that up man
but its meant to be slow like the slow and rugged lol
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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26-09-2007 22:43 |
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Seven Gun
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where is the intro?
its hard to review a tune when there is only a little part of it to hear. also its difficult to vote on as its too short.
beats n bass sound quite nice n crisp tho.
got an old metalheadz/ moving shadow feel.
i like whats there.
not bad at all.
need a full track tho mate.
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27-09-2007 16:28 |
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Tomos
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I like the slower vibe on this. The beats sound pretty good but need some extra punch. Cool background melodies and a decent bassline on top. You got the basics right there. The bass sound needs some work tho - there's not enough bassyness in it for me and it 'drones' too much. It needs to be tighter.
All in all, a good preview. Cool.
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27-09-2007 18:49 |
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Binary Havoc
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Hey Collective wat gwarn?
I think this shows quite a bit of promise. I like the melody and the breaks and the synth noise are pretty good. Synth needs some additional help in a lower frequency.
Problem for me with the beats is that they all sound a bit like an intro / build up break without ever really droppin heavy enough. The kick and snare aren't sufficfient really.
A good start. Needs more but a good start
Nice one
BH
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27-09-2007 20:01 |
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collective
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yeah im still working on it the beats in this preview are for the intro so you were right to point it out
ive played with the synth and it doesnt drone now so cheers for the input im now working on the drop in the main part so be a few days an il have it on here fully (i hope)
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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27-09-2007 23:25 |
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