lead:end - From love to hate..

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lead:end - From love to hate..

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lead:end lead:end is a male

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Please check out my new track 'From love to hate..' and post your comments here!!!

oowww yeah, shit up and running again... slight prob i'm still on fruity, pumped all my cash into new gear, but hardly any programs.. anyway here's a new one for ya.. some hussy broke my hart. here's my story:

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26-09-2007 22:16

lead:end lead:end is a male

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oh yeah, seven gun if u don't mind, i used a little break from ya, it's kinda beatsialicious! Wink

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26-09-2007 22:50

syneptic syneptic is a male

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i would change the intro break into something more floating - something different

the synth sound that comes in at 0.16 needs something - so i like the idea of that synth - but he sounds a bit odd and doesnt fit to the bassline imo !

overall - funny ideas (especially the synth line - but it really needs some better eqíng /reverb/ and probably some other things) - and the drums need more power and pressure !

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27-09-2007 13:18

Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male

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cool.
soom nice ideas.

i quite like the bass.

th beats need a bit of work on the mix side of things. the bottom needs to hit a bit harder too.
try watch a beats eq tutorial, they help.

the resonance on the synth later in the track is too high for me.

all said n done this track had me nodding my head in parts fro sure, but maybe its a bit too "busy"
sometimes less is more.
or maybe try dynamic mixing where you adjust sample velocities as other samples join in and out.
some excellent ideas in this, just needs to gel together more.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Seven Gun: 27-09-2007 16:21.

27-09-2007 16:19

Tomos

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I think Seven Gun has hit the nail on the head with his review. Totally agree.

I'd also add that the levels need quite a bit of work. For instance, the synths often come in really loud compared to the beats, especially during the last third of the track. The beats kinda got lost. You need to try and get a nice balance of sounds and levels in there.

Like Seven, I also liked the basslines. But there's too many melodies and different things going on. Less is often more, for sure.

Nice track, but still needs some work.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Tomos: 27-09-2007 18:41.

27-09-2007 18:40

Binary Havoc Binary Havoc is a male

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Yo lead:end

Liked a lot of the tune man but felt quite a bit of it didn't sit very easily with itself. The synth line clashes quite badly with the bass for example in the first section. Maybe try a call n answer thing between the 2 parts?
When the bass is on its own the tune feels much more coherent. The synth /bass combo do work far better later in the tune from about 3:40 onwards though.
Still think the beats need to sit up the mix a little above the synths.

Good melodies though and I did enjoy the tune. Just a bit of a remaster required imo. Good work!!

BH

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27-09-2007 20:16

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