 GeeZZ - shottin against the clock |
GeeZZ
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Registration Date: 31-03-2007
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Please check out my new track 'shottin against the clock' and post your comments here!!!
first upload, lookin forward 2 n e feedback
i know the production needs work speicaly the drums. i wanted 2 put it up here b4 i did n e fin eles 2 it. i think the structure ect is finished tho.
bless u if u review n dont hold back!
x amount 2 the dot B E, big site!!
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23-09-2007 16:05 |
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Binary Havoc 
Binary Havoc
Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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Ez GeeZZ
First thing to note is that this is mastered pretty quiet but only a preview so easily fixed
Nice full sound to the mix. Drums n melody do need some work and get quite repetitive up until the 1st drop. ((And later in the tune)
Drums are a bit thin overall, maybe missing something in the higher register to go with the hats and definately wantin sommat a bit more powerful in both the kick and snare departments.
Like the basses, good choice of sounds
Overall, not bad. Some nice elements but needs more variation throughout.
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23-09-2007 18:05 |
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Binary Havoc
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23-09-2007 18:12 |
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BattleDrone
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Drums do need work, don't know what to do with this track, it's not bad, but I'm not feeling it. The bass sound is really good and the instruments are good and all, but I would do things different when it comes to melodies. Maybe you have too much going on all the time. Call'n answer structure works better for dancefloor.
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23-09-2007 21:56 |
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GeeZZ
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23-09-2007 22:45 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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biggupz on the first track.
intro needs more going on.
more excitement in the build ups etc.
the structure needs some work too. more change ups
needed for this style.
also the beats need more ooomph. try layering different sounding kicks n snares on top of what you have. just for the experiment.
some nice ideas....work on it.
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25-09-2007 16:43 |
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Tomos
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Firsty, nice to have you on board GeeZZ!! 
Yeah, the mix is pretty quiet and a little muddy throughout, but nothing to have sleeplesness nights over. You'll certainly improve as you go on. The levels seem fairly balanced but the snare and bass are too quiet. The bass really needs a lot of work to get the sound right. The effect you've put on it is good but it's really lacking some 'oomph'. It needs to make you do this 
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The synth melodies are ok but get a little tiresome as the track progresses. You need to incorporate some new sounds in there and mix it up a bit.
Some definite promise in there, overall a pretty good track. But it still needs quite a bit of work. Keep at it Gee and you'll get there!
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