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collective 
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Please check out my new track 'nites templa' and post your comments here!!!
just my first real attempt at dnb so plz give advice and constructive critiscicum
ive been trying to make beats for a year now so i thought id do one for here to see what people think
plz review and go easy ta peeps
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21-09-2007 14:03 |
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BattleDrone
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Bit minimalisctic and oldschool with just sub basses, but for a first tune it's really good. Avoid putting your bassdrum in stereo. The kick could use some more low end as well.
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21-09-2007 22:09 |
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collective
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errm yeah sure i will take that on board and try to put in more than a sub bass, i did think the kick needed more ummph but when i added more kicks to the chopper break it just starts to sound out a muddy mabye it was just me but i will work on it
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22-09-2007 00:11 |
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Tomos
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Definite old school feel to this. It's slower and more simple than most tunes today. Reminds me a bit of the tunes on MetalHeadz vol 2, Platinum Breakz (1997).
The beats are good, especially the breaks in the second half. However, they sound quite thin. You need to beef the sound up. Also, the break down in the middle takes too long. I was left wondering "Has the track finished?". You could probably shorten that part to half.
The tune kind of repeats itself (old school style again). It would be nice to hear some different fills, edits and sounds coming in.
But nice first tune Collective.
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22-09-2007 10:51 |
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BattleDrone
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It's been a good week upto now, 2 producers showing their first track and they were both really good (I remember my first track 
, in fact I still need to improve a lot). The last part of 2007 promises a lot of good stuff to appear on this site. Yummy.
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22-09-2007 12:19 |
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collective
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cheers for the response peeps glad some people had the time to add there advice
will work harder now
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22-09-2007 18:59 |
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