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tryptech 
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Please check out my new track 'Cross' and post your comments here!!!
Didnt like my previous track anymore so started new one, many short tracks make your evolution go faster so,
its made on fruity 6, and cooledit lots of synths, toxic, 3xosc for the subs, etc and lots of samples
intro could be longer but if i like it yet within a week I give it a more specific intro
everybody who replies thanks, I certainly reply back as fast as possibel, by the way the quality is so high thi stime, its a huge competition so many good tracks are delivered, nice
Bravooo
Greetz, and Keep loving that naughty kicking beat and that swelling wobblng bassseess
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11-09-2007 14:34 |
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djphrenzy
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I love the groove to this track! It's just... funky! Although, I think it could use just a hair more development as far as the sounds themselves. I'd use some additional effects (automation) on the main synth that comes in to break it up. I love how the arpeggio synth and the bongos/break work together.
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11-09-2007 16:53 |
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BattleDrone
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The intro is long enough, I consider everything before 1:58 to be intro, what I heard is not bad at all, but just when the track starts to get hot it ends allready. Bass sounds really poppy (listened to subfocus - Airplaine?), maybe you could make the wobble effect a bit more extreme towards the end of the bar to give it more explosive energy? The part that starts from 1:58 should last much longer, it's the main theme of the track. The you should play this second drop and make another part with hot action.
The track certainly has potential, but you should work out the main part then.
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12-09-2007 10:16 |
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cynik
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wheres that?
intro is working but nothing special
fairly simple drive this one
long ass buildup but not much pressure from it. Id introduce a few synth licks and/or bass teasers
once the bass drops its not in key with the rest. not a fan of the high pitch swoop
high synth gets annoying pretty fast
youve made better. I made way crappier than this too
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12-09-2007 11:24 |
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Tomos
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Nice. Didn't blow my socks off but I enjoyed it. Yes, the production quality is pretty good. Beats sound really good (although I don't think they are fast enough for dnb).
There's too many SFX for my liking, particularly in the intro. That's just a personal thing of course but I reckon you should focus more on meldoy and basslines.
Apart from that, this is a decent tune. Nice one.
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12-09-2007 19:58 |
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tryptech
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Thanks tomos, jeah im bizzy on basses now, jeah its just an 165 BPM tune, a bit based on blacksun empire with that congas.
But a bass is even more difficult
hanks for the replies
and cynik sorry for not reviewing your track yet gonna fix that now
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12-09-2007 20:46 |
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Sizzle
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hey scaranja.
this tune is ok but it needs to change up a lot more in the melodie of the synth.
you could do with actually adding some big bass wobbles at the end or your bass sequence. this would add surprise to the listener.
there was some good sounds in there and i was head nodding for a while there.
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13-09-2007 13:47 |
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Binary Havoc
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Hey Scaranja
Nice tune man!!
Really dig the way it rolls along up to the beat droppin at 2 minutes. Main beat is good. Needs some more peaks n bigger drops and fattening up generally but a great start dude. Theres an extremely Fat tune in there with a bit more work.
Respect
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14-09-2007 09:20 |
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tryptech
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jeaah
tahnks BH, but your track is stiill lmore fatter believe me, your track ruless
hha
jimmy c, jeah i know Im still learning, basses are not yet the best shizzle
and jeah your tracks are just pro dude, i shall need to practice a lot to get that sound of yours, not that i want toc opy your soudn, just love it
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14-09-2007 11:23 |
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tryptech
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im producing for about 1 year and some weeks
soo dont know whether im slow or fast in getting my skills online just try to make the best from every track, but it keeps getting better (sound quality i think)
but still far from home
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14-09-2007 12:43 |
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D2o
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14-09-2007 12:44 |
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tryptech
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your a liquid king
dude
hah
just like to play a song of yours on a chill evening siting together with some friends
hah
hope you get signed with some song
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14-09-2007 12:47 |
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Seven Gun
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lol
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14-09-2007 14:48 |
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