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Binary Havoc 
Binary Havoc
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Please check out my new track 'Serious Tuesdays' and post your comments here!!!
EZ
Following the useful feedback from Tomos, Jimmy C, Brokemission n lightninflash, here's me next attempt at this.
1st sections been extended to push the first drop back some, extra reese added to fatten out the synth line over the 1st section, pads and beats fattened up for the second half and the whole thing mastered a bit (well fuck it) a lot louder. Feedback wanted as always.
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10-09-2007 20:15 |
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tryptech
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Perfect dude, ready for serious mastering in the studio and pressing on lovely vinyl, LIQUID RULES TOO
respect
9.5 outtah 10
tht filtered beats and that voice are just lovee
jeahh
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10-09-2007 21:44 |
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BattleDrone
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Clean, loud, balanced. Good feel, pads fit great. Towards the end the tracks is a real beauty. The track could have been a minute (or 2) longer for me. Maybe my only negative point is that the first part of the track is not even close to the vibe of the second part.
Great progress!
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10-09-2007 22:01 |
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Tomos
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Loud! Nice. Cool, fresh sounds to start off the track. Perfect opening.
When the beats drop there seems to be a dip in volume. Also, the snare is still much too quiet, imo. And I really, really don't like the SFX at 1.41 and 2.01! 
Great breakdown section in the middle. Excellent vocal line. I was waiting in anticipation for the drop. Pretty good when it came. I'd turn up the beats a little tho.
Very nice pads and background sounds towards the end of the track. Gives the track a lovely atmospheric vibe.
A definite improvement BH! Nice one, good work. Keep it up big man. 
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10-09-2007 23:58 |
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xevex
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great tune- i think the intro is perfect sounding, then the drop becomes too weak. if you can't fatten up the first main part then maybe take some bass out of the intro. nice track
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11-09-2007 02:41 |
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Surya
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The snare in the first part is really insufficient. Why don't you use the same snare as in the second part? That would be good.
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11-09-2007 07:43 |
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djphrenzy
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Big tune! One thing, I might vary the bassline a bit after the first phrase of the drop... maybe change like two notes just to give it a bit of variation, then go back to the original.
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12-09-2007 21:41 |
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Binary Havoc
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Yo thnx again for all the comments
Suyra > hadnt even considered that idea wiv the snare. will give it a go n see how it sits
Cynik > ill get back t ya bout the remix idea
Nice one
BH
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13-09-2007 09:06 |
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Seven Gun
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where is the snare?
nice vocals and atmosphere. ah the second part is much better. why not base the whole track on that?
this track is ok but i dont like the structure, it seems not to fit together as well as it could.
nice mixdown and nice ambience still make this pretty good though.
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13-09-2007 14:44 |
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Sizzle
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Originally posted by Seven Gun
where is the snare?
nice vocals and atmosphere. ah the second part is much better. why not base the whole track on that?
this track is ok but i dont like the structure, it seems not to fit together as well as it could.
nice mixdown and nice ambience still make this pretty good though. |
yeah, what he said.
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13-09-2007 15:04 |
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djphrenzy
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I think it needs a bit more ass-end. Diggin all the synth work. Could use a teensy bit more variation. Possibly a high-pass on the bass toward the end of the phrase, and maybe some cuts? Has potential, needs just a little work to be great.
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16-09-2007 04:50 |
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GeeZZ
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like the reese dun well its jus the break in it inbetween notes you get a lil bum ta pokin thru then it comes in again (if u get meh) i like that i would have put a 4x4 all the way thu cos i wud like 2 hear it on the beging reese
swirly synth does good wiv reese @d end
props
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