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lead:end 
straight up beastin'
Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'The fear flatlined..' and post your comments here!!!
well people it finally happened.. computer went byebye, luckally i had just put the latest version on my mp 3... lost al me shit and every single fl file i had on my extern drive are damaged and fl won't open them.. this can take a while before i can do som'n again.. anyway, enjoy it's being, the fear flatlined.
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10-09-2007 20:08 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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I think the metallic snare sound you use doesn't fit in. Also the track doesn't really go anywhere imo.
Bass sounds muddy.
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10-09-2007 21:57 |
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Tomos
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In terms of production quality I think this track still needs a hell of a lot of work but you've done some interesting things to the bass and beats.
The start is pretty slow until the beats kick in at 1.01, which are nice. The distorted bassline is too messy. It needs to be a lot tighter. Also, the snare at this point doesn't fit in. The FX in the background are also muddying the mix.
The middle section of the track is lacking structure and coherence. It's a little bit of everything without being anything in particular, if you know what I mean. But there's some interesting fills and variations in there.
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10-09-2007 23:41 |
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xevex
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Registration Date: 06-08-2007
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over compressed but a pretty cool song
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11-09-2007 02:46 |
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tryptech
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Im not diggin your style, but i think its well poduced except some sound, but jeah thats why youre here.
Your rating is much to low.
Intro part nice subsounds, nice slow moving beats, i would boost the snare some around, middle herzes hha dont knwo houw to say
to give it some low end
your beats are very experimental my be a littl eto fast in the second part, it would sound better bij the way when you used kick snare kick snare kick kick snare kick snare
and that bass synt needs some cuts in the middle section to giv eroam for you snare, and atmo
keep on it
7 outtah 10
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11-09-2007 14:50 |
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lead:end
straight up beastin'
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that's exactly the problem.. can't change anything... all is gone.. my new gear was expected today, now it's friday.. i'm on this crappy laptop with barely enough juice to support me uploading a choon... and i'm goin' completely mental i swear...when i get everything up and running i'm gonna remake the song completely, bought nice soundgear, and some expensive ass headphone..if only it would arrive 
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11-09-2007 19:45 |
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cynik
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thi is in fact a cool tune
could do with a lot heavier drum line with more pronounced kicks snares etc. more highend sizzle, Id consider distortion. as well as a whole lot of drilling but thats a matter of taste
drums are not tuned in, try and listen to the drums alone before you put em in a tune; its always nice to have a harmony between the kick snare, hihats etc.. crashes
shame your computer got busted
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12-09-2007 01:13 |
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