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tryptech tryptech is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Lipps' and post your comments here!!!

HIi, long tim ei posted something,

i'm working on sommething more fluent,
now, this is a preview, intentionally ment to be only the main part of the song

i must see

thanks to everybody who can give me som etips and soo


greetz

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05-09-2007 17:53 Homepage of tryptech
CULTURE BOY CULTURE BOY is a male
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bets took me by surprise at first but the track is cool! reminds me of some early twisted liquid stuff. deffo got potential. big up

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05-09-2007 18:09 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
Tomos Tomos is a male
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The mix is definitely a bit muddy and some of the pads are too loud. You need to bring some clarity in there. The pads are drowning out the beats at times which need to be louder. I do like the beats tho - they sound pretty cool to me. Interesting snare sounds. And the melodies are really nice too. No problems there at all, imo.

Once you start cleaning up the sound you'll have a really solid basis to make a decent tune. Keep at it!!

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05-09-2007 20:19 Homepage of Tomos
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This is sounding like it could be a great tune. just the mix needs sorting.
them pads in the begining are suck the power from the drums. Scoop out some low mid on them maybe and turn them down a touch.

but i'm really digging the vibe. as said the melodies are nice.

keep going man!!

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05-09-2007 20:28 Homepage of D2o
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Thanks dudes, jeah the mix is not yet optimal, i made this shit yesterday
and already dealed with those probs gald you like the idea though

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05-09-2007 20:32 Homepage of tryptech
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Love the intro-part a lot. When the pads drop out the track is too empty and those synth stabs are no good. Better use bass stabs and use a couple of different basses in some call and answer pattern. Also the part from 45" on sounds empty compared to the beginning. Maybe a highpitched pad (to leave room for something else) would solve this.
The break sounds a bit thin compared to the rest of the track, maybe layer on some bassdrum with a bit more low end and a snare with more impact.

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05-09-2007 21:52 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Like the wide sound, thought some may be clipping just a little bit. LIke the groove! I'm very into odd synth lines, bleeps, swooshes etc so keep it up! Might choose a more crisp snare sample?!?

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08-09-2007 07:38 Homepage of Schmidi
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