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iznup 
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 17-12-2003
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20-12-2003 15:04 |
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mr-e
Producer
Registration Date: 24-07-2003
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The riffs sound to straight on imo , maybe if you put in more songstructure and harder and softer parts , you can get away with it but now the song sounds like it's going nowhere.
It can work , but then you have to build up to it.
Drums are ok, maybe make them sound cleaner but that's just personal taste 
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20-12-2003 19:18 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Nice sound... though some parts do cliping and distorsion, example the basses.. nevermind, that is probably because of the 64kb encoding...
Extremely dancing track... similarities with DarkStep... nice ;-)
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20-12-2003 19:29 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Some melodies are _really_ dull, others are fine.
You do have problems with your basses. They conflict with each other sometimes, and they are too loud (some more than others)
The whole track sounds lofi, but since it is a 64kbps MP3 I think that's the problem.
Drums are a bit straight, work on them to make them more intresting.
Some good ideas in there (like you use of the Dillinja bass) but needs a lot of work.
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20-12-2003 21:59 |
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iznup
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 17-12-2003
Posts: 42
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Ok! I will go to give adjustments that you had indicated me! I go to see if I improve more the sound pra to have a pleasant quality! very obliged for the patience! 
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iznup@drumbass.com.br
Junglism in Brasil 
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21-12-2003 17:30 |
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