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Seven Gun 
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nice progressive liquid feel to this one.
upside......
can hear the quality as usual.
great bass again and some nice synths rolling on top of it. i find it very hard to get a synth to fit basslines. also the mix is very good.
downside....
i think the the build up needs more tension building up to the drop.
not super fond of the top end of the snare, its a bit hissy.
maybe check its higher layer and scoop out a smidgy bit of 5khz.
on 2nd listen.... the high melody you play later in the track is awesome and dreamy but just sounds a bit too drawn out. try cut the reverb or
tighten up the release on the amp env.
but thats just picking bones on a cool track.
not your best one, but still very cool.
good luck on ya new gaff.
peace, 7G
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03-09-2007 14:59 |
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nice beats bruv.. tight ass shit.. nice samples used at the intro.. like the bassy wobble..whoa shit! booobobobbbbbb, groovin' bass, synth and bassline work veryy well, except when the synth goes higher it hurts my ears.. might be my headphones tho.. realy need to buy some new ones..
really sweet man.. when i first downloaded a song on this site alot of them where yours.. still listen little blue fuckers regularly..
nice.
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03-09-2007 21:17 |
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cynik
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03-09-2007 23:54 |
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goonybag
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nice dreamy start,as always your drums are spot on, but i find they are looping over a bit too long (something i also am guilty of in a lot of my tracks) Bit of a floater this one, a little different to normal. the track has a nice over all feel with great production there are also some great synths throughout. put a big drop at 3:20, after that synth rises, and let it roll for 6 minutes or so.I reckon this could be a bit of an epic, suck the listener in, beat em up, then heal their wounds. great preview.
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04-09-2007 01:53 |
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Tomos
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I love the way this tune progresses. It takes you onto each level very smoothly. Everything is flowing really naturally. Cool.
The sounds are top notch, can't find fault with them at all.
Majorly disappointed when it started to fade out!! I was really geting into that. Can't wait for the final version!
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04-09-2007 18:49 |
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Seven Gun
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your stuff is top notch bizzle for shizzle.
i still can't believe how good the henchman is!!
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05-09-2007 02:02 |
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Tomos
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Originally posted by Seven Gun
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LOL, I had to laugh at that "bizzle for shizzle" comment!! Never heard that one before. Will have to remember it.
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05-09-2007 08:53 |
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Rudeone
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drums are sweet. pads fine, dont like the bellsynthsound though. bassline is too wide for my likes. lead coming in doesnt blend to well with the other elements. tune has a deep vibe to it but needs more drive. plz remove the lead melodie 
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05-09-2007 13:08 |
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tryptech
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05-09-2007 18:04 |
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tryptech
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05-09-2007 20:33 |
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philbee
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nice to have yah bac jim...those beatz man tighter than a nun on sunday..lovin those lil rolls on the end bruv sweet..intros got a real detroit house sound to it like it..nice lil stabs b4 the main drop..main bass is sweet(if a lil quite imo)maybee alil boost it reminds me of an ol edrush bass riff cant remember what tune ..anyways i like the synthy stabs you bring in nice touch..not really my usual flavour i like but man you jus got it mate..respect..future thinkin liquid
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06-09-2007 00:01 |
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D2o
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08-09-2007 11:41 |
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BROKEMISSION
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FRESH SOUND LOVE THE SAMPS PERFECT FIT...A LITTLE ON THE HAPPY SIDE NEED SOME DARK BASS TO GET THE EVILNESS...ALTHOUGH ON THE SWITCH I DOES GET EVIL...COMPOSSED VERY WELL...DEFINITE REWIND
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09-09-2007 09:33 |
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Invent
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hmm a little too steriel for my taste... missing the heavyness.. however your drums work out good and got the usual flow to it.. the build up doesnt excite too much, more of a drop would be sweet..
i would consider it more of an idea.. more swictchups more fuckups.. make the crowd suspect a drop but make them very stylish..
the drums sound clean and full.. good sample choice..
the synths sound very simple and thin.. maybe a bit delay on it.. or reverb to open it up more of the mix...
thats it for now.. overall i think its a good track but can have its additions to make it better... the bass sounds cool... and thick.. sounds warm too ...
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09-09-2007 14:40 |
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cynik
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14-09-2007 12:31 |
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djphrenzy
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I listen to this track earlier and didn't have time to review it, so I came back to leave comments. Really great clean sound. Good use of elements to create ambiance. I dig the chord progression a lot. The mixdown is superb. The only thing I might suggest is a bit more variations on the drums. Overall killer tune. 320? I'll play it out. 
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