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ReaferSlime
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are you serious
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20-12-2003 10:12 |
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ReaferSlime
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no, for real
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20-12-2003 10:12 |
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Muad'Dib
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Have u heard the tune? I suggest you to ;-)
I was kiddin' for that, noone can finish in 2 minutes, right? But, the song is high-erotic. :-)
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20-12-2003 14:13 |
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Surya
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Wouldn't call it erotc, I have other thoughts about what is erotic than some porn samples
Anyway
Melody is a bit dull, but should be good enuf for a no-brain-no-pain-dancefloor track.
Levels need some SERIOUS work man. Some things sound lofi, other things sound very crisp. And the 'vocals' are defo too loud, having a distracting effect, making it that I didn't even notice if the song structure was good
Really short tho.
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20-12-2003 21:55 |
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Muad'Dib
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Originally posted by Surya
Wouldn't call it erotc, I have other thoughts about what is erotic than some porn samples
Anyway
Melody is a bit dull, but should be good enuf for a no-brain-no-pain-dancefloor track.
Levels need some SERIOUS work man. Some things sound lofi, other things sound very crisp. And the 'vocals' are defo too loud, having a distracting effect, making it that I didn't even notice if the song structure was good
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Ok, deep porn is the real name... ;-)) Nothing erotic!
Levels? What do you mean by that? :-)
What things sound crisp (snares and kicks I suppose) and what sound lofi (???)...
The vocals are ment to distract you from the dull dance melody...
Short, yes, but if I prolong it, it will be more boring and dull.. :-) Whatever, it is not very good track, 5/10 I'd give... but it's my stuff alright ;-)
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20-12-2003 22:35 |
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your samples and sounds are well worked and well chosen, but work on those beats, make em waaaay more varied and deeper, and work on the levelling, and the structure, try build up something big ...
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21-12-2003 11:02 |
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Surya
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Levels? What do you mean by that? :-) |
I mean that some things should be EQed totally differently, and some things should be louder, others should be less loud. The overall ballance of the song should be worked on a lot more.
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What things sound crisp (snares and kicks I suppose) and what sound lofi (???)... |
Overall, your snares and hats are quite crisp, and so are the vocals, but most of the hoovers and effects sound quite lofi
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21-12-2003 14:35 |
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Originally posted by Surya
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Levels? What do you mean by that? :-) |
I mean that some things should be EQed totally differently, and some things should be louder, others should be less loud. The overall ballance of the song should be worked on a lot more.
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What things sound crisp (snares and kicks I suppose) and what sound lofi (???)... |
Overall, your snares and hats are quite crisp, and so are the vocals, but most of the hoovers and effects sound quite lofi |
you should really define that "crisp" thing of yours ... i always knew nobody had a bloody clue about what it's supposed to mean
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21-12-2003 14:47 |
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Surya
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Thought that was clear
Things that sound clear, have enough high end to it, but aren't over EQed sound crisp.
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21-12-2003 14:51 |
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kyokpae
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Hey Andriej,
Beat is really weak. Altough main bass sample is quite good. Ahhh. And listening to this didn't make me aroused. Rip out those stupid samples from porno video and focus on making this track interesting in another way
I think the sexiest dnb tracks are those influenced with house music. Try out - Lil Louis - French Kiss.
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21-12-2003 16:07 |
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Originally posted by kyokpae
Hey Andriej,
Beat is really weak. Altough main bass sample is quite good. Ahhh. And listening to this didn't make me aroused. Rip out those stupid samples from porno video and focus on making this track interesting in another way
I think the sexiest dnb tracks are those influenced with house music. Try out - Lil Louis - French Kiss.
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and where do you think his samples come from ?
the sexiest music is music of which you know it was created while watching porn ...
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21-12-2003 16:11 |
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Muad'Dib
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Thanks for the valuable comments, I realy needed that. ;-)
Now, let'z responze...
kyokpae, how do you know that my name iz Andrej?! :-)) Nobody knows that.. ;-)
By -J-:
and where do you think his samples come from ?
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Hehehe, you're right ;-))
I'll fix all those stuff.. don't worry... I have to make the beat more interesting... I know ..:-)
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21-12-2003 18:45 |
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kyokpae
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I belive that secret personal data was in track's id_tag
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21-12-2003 22:02 |
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Muad'Dib
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:-)))
You're right.. I have to quit signing myself there ;-)
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22-12-2003 11:48 |
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Whizz
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Uhm, you actually sampled a complete tune in this track
Killa bullet, I can clearly hear it. That's just not done man
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30-12-2003 21:36 |
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Muad'Dib
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Well, the tune is mine ;-) And the samples, of course, are not. I couldn't record that, u know.. ;-)))
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30-12-2003 22:25 |
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Whizz
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Originally posted by muaddib
Well, the tune is mine ;-) And the samples, of course, are not. I couldn't record that, u know.. ;-))) |
That makes no sens at all
Sampling entire basslines from other DnB tunes is just wrong and not-done. If this is the way you want to continue making tunes, you'ld better quite it 'cause no-one will take you seriously in the record bizznizz ...
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31-12-2003 14:56 |
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Muad'Dib
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I DID NOT sample basslines from any tunes, I just used one sound, and that's it! The tune is mine, as well as the sounds. Other stuff is:
a rave sound, and the porno samples. Nothing more.
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31-12-2003 17:32 |
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Whizz
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Originally posted by muaddib
I DID NOT sample basslines from any tunes, I just used one sound, and that's it! The tune is mine, as well as the sounds. Other stuff is:
a rave sound, and the porno samples. Nothing more. |
Nevertheless it's the exact same sound and melodie as the Killa Bullet track
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31-12-2003 17:35 |
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