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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'Belated activity' and post your comments here!!!
Hi peeps, I ve been fighting with this track. I was desperate. Lost. This is the finnished version. The biggets issue was the second growling bass. I am not too sure about it. Gimme some reply what do you think. Cheers
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31-08-2007 00:43 |
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Tomos 
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Short and sweet!! I'm really impressed with the changes you've made, really cool. The track definitely gets better as it goes on - especially from 1.30 onwards.
Not too sure about the beats at the very end. It sounds like you've thrown together a few loops which don't really gel with each other - a bit amateurish, if you don't mind me saying. They're not terrible by any means, just no way near as good as the beats that precede them. I'd like to hear the second half of the track extended a bit, I was disappointed when it ended so quickly.
Yeah, one or two of the basslines are a bit muddy - especially from 1.08 to 1.29 and from 1.29 to 2.16. Perhaps that was your intention, to make them sound more like a SFX rather than bone-fide basslines. They sound quite weak as well, you really need to beef them out.
I love the sub basslines. They create a real Ed Rush vibe. Love it.
Nice one wrm!
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31-08-2007 21:10 |
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lead:end
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for some reason the player doesn't work, and it's not myinternet protection device... when i get it to work i'l review.peace
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31-08-2007 23:50 |
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BattleDrone
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Like the track. I understand your doubts with the second bass. One problem I'm having with the track is that the drums seem to be in "another dimension" as the rest of the track. This is probably caused by the reverb on a lot of elements.
Cool track though
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01-09-2007 13:34 |
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wrm
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another dimension? dont get you man. Besides, theres no reverb at all.
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01-09-2007 17:48 |
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Seven Gun
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totally sounds like that icicle and nympho tune called
shadows of tomorrow, cant be just a coincidence, check it....
http://www.myspace.com/criticalmusic 2nd track down
i think you should keep with the sounds upto 1.30
kick n snare need to be a tiny bit beefier, but just a bit.
i also still think you should stick a child note on top of the sub bass after the 1.30 break.
but all that said, i love this kind of vibe. real soldier business!!
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02-09-2007 14:12 |
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lead:end
straight up beastin'
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finally the player works once again... like the intro veryy much... nice sub in there..also like the beats they sound clean.. bass crumbles a little bit.. could be my headphones though.. nice variation troughout the track.. certainly had my head boppin.. altho the bass might be a little too loud..but still could be my headphones... nice rolling beats that's for sure..
is nice!
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02-09-2007 19:04 |
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goonybag
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you got some nice shit going on in that intro mate, nice one, rolls nicely into the beat. I like whats going on aroung 1:40, feels like a push forward, momentum shifter. There is some good ghost programming going on in the beat.
Only thing i dont like is it ending at 3 minutes.I reckon you should unleash the beast here, and try to fuck people up with a devestaing drop, a real smasher. mmmmsayin?
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