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lead:end 
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Please check out my new track 'The Fear.' and post your comments here!!!
just a very early preview of a track i'm working on... letme know what you think... thx
tips always welcome
greetz.
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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30-08-2007 13:04 |
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Seven Gun
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i find its nicer if i do some reviews before i post a track
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30-08-2007 13:10 |
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lead:end
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i'm sorry i posted it in a hurry... i'l do some reviews, some now some later on
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30-08-2007 17:37 |
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wrm
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i dont like how the volume is turning up in the beginning. Also it seems like the volume level in whole tune is a bit down. The reverbed snare doesnt sound too good imo. You have you sign in this tune forshure. You have your own style which can be easily recognised. The kick is too mufled and drowned. BTW what software are u using?
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31-08-2007 11:17 |
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Seven Gun
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the very first part sucks, sorry.
dont like the volume edit.
the beats sound nice (except the kick) when they are fully in.
that lead synth is cool, try and clean that up.
you seem to have some good ideas but
the mix is not good i'm afraid.
the best tip i can give you is look up an EQ tutorial. there are some on this site.
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31-08-2007 13:21 |
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Tomos
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I actually quite like the way the track gradually increases in volume. You don't hear that often and it has a moody vibe, which fits in the rest of the track.
However, I have to say, like the others, that the sound really lets this preview down. I know it's still early days but it's too quiet, too muffled and there's too much reverb on the beats (especially the snare) which has the effect of muddying the whole mix.
The melody on the main synth is good. Can't see any probs with that at all. And the changes are good too. You don't stick to the same line. You mix it up with different variations, and they're good. But again, the sounds isn't quite there. It's needs to have more - or at least different - effects on it. It sounds a bit dry and flat at the mo. Try putting some distortion on it to make it more edgy, and maybe some chorus or phaser, or something similar. Also, you need to turn it up a little.
Going back to the beats again - they're not rolling enough for me. Listen to Philbee's stuff; that's the kind of beats I'd try to create if this was my track.
Anyways, definite potential in this one LE. Still a long way to go but keep at it bro!!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Tomos: 31-08-2007 19:07.
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31-08-2007 19:07 |
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goonybag
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dunno about the build up in the intro. i really do like the synth though, nice ball tearer. definitely ends abruptly, needs more work, will review again when finished.
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