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philbee 
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Please check out my new track 'writersbloc(preview)' and post your comments here!!!
yes peeps...last two weeks man ,jus bin going thru the worst an scariest writers bloc ive ever experienced in my life..even questioned my skills ..almost gonna quit the game..complete insanity..anywayz..started a new tune an i think its pretty cool..quite bare at the mo,just ideas just wanted to get a bit o feedbac..gonna be loads more fx etc goin on anywayz any feed bac recieved grate fully good or bad..peace n love to da dnb.be massive
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26-08-2007 20:48 |
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Uberchile
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Tune is bangin for a bare song, as u say fx is needed and mabye sum variation in the bass line, drum fills would be nice along with some tension builing sweeps and pushed filter synth riffs.
the style is quite similar to about 1000 other underground tracks try and push the borders with industrial explosion or mettalic fx.
each section is very repetative even for drum and bass, variation is needed skip a couple of the starting kicks and replace it for some delayed vox or fx.
after sorting the main sections try some overall reverb or delay efects as you reach the end of each section to add to the tension and create undercutting as a bridge ionto the next, then place some lyrics or phrases in appropriate places and wrap it up and sell it. should be a good track when its finished. best of luck
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26-08-2007 21:18 |
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Seven Gun
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very nice.
that crush break is a bit obvious but thats no biggie.
i think some vocals will sound cool in this.
perfect start actually, nothing to say, you already said it phil.
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26-08-2007 21:34 |
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wrm
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Love the bassline, those little stabs are just perfect. I think you´ve done very good job so far. Although some variety is needed. Add some drop for shure. Btw: I bare with u. Beem going through same crissis
Good advice...put some non DnB tunes on...inspiration will come soon
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26-08-2007 21:52 |
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philbee
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cheers man
@7g yeah the crush is comin thru on it,layered the fuck out of it with some other hits and a lil amen stab but gotta bring em up a bit in the mix..onit
@wrm yeah bruv it is a nightmare..alot to do with workin alot...and gettin no time and rushin stuff..good advice thou dude..cheers
anymore?
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26-08-2007 21:59 |
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Tomos
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"Almost gonna quit the game"?! Are you fuckin mental?! Seriously, if you're out of ideas just put it down for a bit and come back to it when you feel inspired again.
Anyways, yes, very sparse but still very good!! I really like the vibes on this one. Once again, the beats are rolling sweet. Excellent sound. I'd like to hear more edits tho - but this is still a preview of course.
You've definiately got the makings of a nice tune here!!
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26-08-2007 22:18 |
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BattleDrone
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Sounds sick, no trace of a writers block dude...
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26-08-2007 22:41 |
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Shinyuri
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yeh man wot the rass u talkin bout - sik tune - would definatley sit well n a ghetto rave. good vibes, great ideas. its true what the wrm said - listen to some tunes which aint dnb - that and get wasted on ur poison of choice! for me - i try and get out of the "studio" and make the tunes on a laptop somewhere else when i get the block. this week i was on the 46th floor of a goverment building taking a rather large dump while making a tune (no lie mans) - it helps me!
anyways - the ideas on the track r good - would like it to be louder tho. try layering a distorted high bass over the drop bass too, make it more pronounced.
peace
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30-08-2007 19:07 |
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cynik
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needs harder drums imo, or sojmething teebeestic. bassline is very good if a bit repetitive but it needs only a nudge here n there, possibly a modulation twist
work it, has potential for sure
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30-08-2007 19:28 |
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