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Lightningflash 
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Please check out my new track 'La La Laaaa' and post your comments here!!!
I've spent so long on this I don't know wether it sounds ok any more, I've just lost it.
I've listened to previous advice and fitted it in to this one
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Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745
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25-08-2007 16:24 |
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cynik
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soundin quite good! 
drums are great.
bass drop is a bit abrupt and also short.
feels like you focused on the vibe more than the actual track at times
I do like the changeup @1:50
some of the bass sounds are not up to the standard of the other sounds like that at 2:30.
great potential in this one, good vibe; Id change that bass sound though
keep at it
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26-08-2007 01:42 |
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Tomos
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Wow, this is a massive improvement! You're definitely not hearing wrong, this is good stuff.
That first bassline is a bit loud and actually a bit out of place. The melody is good but the sound of it doesn't fit in with all the whole spacey vibes.
Some really cool and original beat edits in there! Especially the kicks. How did you create them?
I love the break down at around 5.55. If you listen closely there's some really decent synth melodies in there.
Nice one LF!! This is impressive dude.
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26-08-2007 18:10 |
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Lightningflash
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well thanx again for D feeds
As I have sayid before I have been listening to your advice and I will continue to do so with this one, so Ill try some other bass' after I have had a rest from it a bit.
The drum loop was down loaded from this site name i think amen1
and I just added some one shots and HI Hat over top of the loop and also played only bits of it
Can some one point me in the direction of some nice bass'?
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Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745
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26-08-2007 19:05 |
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Uberchile
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sounds like aphex twin 
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26-08-2007 21:29 |
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cynik
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26-08-2007 23:54 |
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Lightningflash
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OK IV got the mesage about the bass.
Iv also got a great idear and hopfully if it works youll hear the result in the update
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"EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE."
Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745
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