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ReaferSlime - CROOKED

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ReaferSlime
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Registration Date: 11-12-2003
Posts: 26

Please check out my new track 'CROOKED' in the listen page and post your comments here!!!

This track has been deleted. Reason: cleaning up old tracks

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18-12-2003 09:14

Saeteck
Producer

Registration Date: 12-12-2003
Posts: 24

Yo man,

nice work! the bass and reeces have a good vibe, but maybe you could put some more agression in the break? Also, I think layering some more could give a more complete sound to the tune,

anyway, big up, and if ya feel like it, check some of my creations, thx Big Grin

18-12-2003 13:14

ReaferSlime
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Registration Date: 11-12-2003
Posts: 26

my comp. wont let me vibe your flow

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20-12-2003 10:10

Muad'Dib Muad'Dib is a male

Andrejnalin

Registration Date: 02-12-2003
Posts: 4,197

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Nice stuff.. maybe the snare-drum should be little stronger, but it's ok. Some hats are too loud (0:43) covering the snares, but no big deal.

I give 8/10 :-)

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20-12-2003 14:17

mr-e

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Registration Date: 24-07-2003
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great song , great buildups Smile

the drums sound a little seperated from the rest of the mix , maybe you could fix it with some eq en compression on the whole track , don't know for sure what you compressed already

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20-12-2003 19:38

Surya

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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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The hoovers (or is it an electric guitar?) intro are a bit too much in the background thru the whole track.
Like the sound of your snare, but it is a bit too loud.
Give the kick a bit more kick, it's a bit sloppy now.
Cutting of the drumloop you used (at least, I think that's what you did) is a bit messy at times, tighten that up a bit. Somethimes there are real gaps there, where there shouldn't be any.

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20-12-2003 22:03

Type

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Registration Date: 08-01-2004
Posts: 58

The breakbeat starts out well, but indeed, it gets a bit messy after a minute or so...

Needs some remastering and equalizing...

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12-01-2004 23:49

Emblem-X Emblem-X is a male

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Registration Date: 10-11-2002
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looks you like experiment! great that's where it all starts Wink

like the beats at the start but they become messy towards the end and the snares don't sound in place, it irritates me.. it's like the beats ain't running at the same speed..

those hoovers are good but they lack power.. like when they switch between hipass filtered and the usual sound!

variation is needed tru the track, the drop don't really work.. it kicks in wrong.. and it becomes boring after some time too much of the same..

cheerz

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Emblem-X: 13-01-2004 16:22.

13-01-2004 16:21

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